List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is relevant but has some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing, such as "make it less" and "miss missing". Try to use clearer expressions and avoid redundancy. Also, keep your answer within 5 sentences and use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

例: It depends on what I am shopping for. For example, when I buy ingredients for cooking, I usually make a list because it helps me remember everything important and avoid missing any items. Moreover, if my mom calls me while I am out and asks me to buy something, having a list makes it easier to keep track and ensures I don't forget anything.

提案: Your answer is clear but contains some grammatical mistakes like "make A to do list" and "helps me remind of those tasks". Use correct articles and prepositions. Also, try to use linking words to connect your ideas and keep the answer concise and natural.

例: Yes, I have developed a habit of making a to-do list before I start work because it helps me remember the tasks I need to complete by the end of the day. This practice makes me feel more productive and efficient at work.

提案: Your answer has some unclear expressions like "not that cup of tea" and awkward phrasing such as "not missing and coordinated". Try to use simple and clear language. Also, avoid repeating "some people" and use linking words to improve coherence.

例: Some people may not like making lists because they find it unnecessary or time-consuming. However, others enjoy making lists when shopping because it helps them stay organised and ensures they don't forget anything important.

提案: Your answer is confusing and contains grammatical errors like "while ago for shopping outside" and "a lot of feature". Please use correct tenses and plural forms. Also, organise your answer logically and use linking words to connect ideas clearly.

例: Nowadays, I prefer using my smartphone to make lists, especially when I go shopping. I usually use the Notes app on my iPhone because it is user-friendly and has many features that help me stay organised and work more efficiently.

× For instance, when I buy ingredients for short cooking, I usually make it less because it helps me remember everything essential and avoid miss missing any items.

✓ For instance, when I buy ingredients for short cooking, I usually make it fewer because it helps me remember everything essential and avoid missing any items.

The phrase 'make it less' is incorrect when referring to countable items like 'ingredients'; 'fewer' should be used instead of 'less' for countable nouns. Also, 'miss missing' is a typographical error; it should be 'missing'. Use 'fewer' to correctly express a smaller number of countable items.

× Also, if my mom calls me when I am out and asked me to buy something, having a list makes it easier to keep track and ensure I don't forget anything important.

✓ Also, if my mom calls me when I am out and asks me to buy something, having a list makes it easier to keep track and ensure I don't forget anything important.

The verb 'asked' is incorrectly used in past tense here; since the condition is present ('if my mom calls'), the verb should be in present tense 'asks' to maintain tense consistency.

× Yes, I have started this usual habit of mine where I make A to do list before I start my work because it helps me remind of those tasks which I need to complete before I wrap up my work and also at the end of the day.

✓ Yes, I have started this usual habit of mine where I make a to-do list before I start my work because it helps me remind myself of those tasks which I need to complete before I wrap up my work and also at the end of the day.

The article 'A' should be lowercase 'a' and 'to do list' should be hyphenated as 'to-do list'. Also, 'helps me remind of' is incomplete; it should be 'helps me remind myself of' to be grammatically correct.

× Yes, I have started this usual habit of mine where I make A to do list before I start my work because it helps me remind of those tasks which I need to complete before I wrap up my work and also at the end of the day.

✓ Yes, I have started this usual habit of mine where I make a to-do list before I start my work because it helps me remind myself of those tasks which I need to complete before I wrap up my work and also at the end of the day.

The phrase 'helps me remind of' is missing the reflexive pronoun 'myself'. The verb 'remind' requires an object, so 'myself' is necessary here to complete the meaning.

× Maybe for some people it's not that cup of tea, but for some people they love doing or making list for going outside for shopping because it makes them feel mindful.

✓ Maybe for some people it's not their cup of tea, but for some people they love doing or making lists for going outside for shopping because it makes them feel mindful.

The phrase 'not that cup of tea' is incorrect; the correct idiom is 'not their cup of tea'. Also, 'making list' should be plural 'making lists' because it refers to the general activity of making multiple lists.

× Maybe for some people it's not that cup of tea, but for some people they love doing or making list for going outside for shopping because it makes them feel mindful.

✓ Maybe for some people it's not their cup of tea, but for some people they love doing or making lists when going outside for shopping because it makes them feel mindful.

The preposition 'for' before 'going outside for shopping' is incorrect; 'when' is more appropriate to indicate the time or occasion of making lists.

× It makes them feel that they are not missing and coordinated or makes them feel organized.

✓ It makes them feel that they are not missing anything and are coordinated or makes them feel organized.

The phrase 'not missing and coordinated' is incomplete and unclear. Adding 'anything' after 'missing' clarifies the meaning. Also, 'are coordinated' is needed to maintain parallel structure and clarity.

× Nowadays I prefer using my smartphone for making a list, while ago for shopping outside.

✓ Nowadays I prefer using my smartphone for making a list; a while ago, I used to shop outside.

The phrase 'while ago for shopping outside' is incorrect and unclear. It should be 'a while ago' to indicate past time, and the sentence should be restructured for clarity.

× I usually use my iPhones notes app because it's really user friendly and it has a lot of feature which enables me to work more efficiently while ago.

✓ I usually use my iPhone's Notes app because it's really user-friendly and it has a lot of features which enable me to work more efficiently.

The possessive form 'iPhones' should be 'iPhone's'. 'Notes' should be capitalized as it is an app name. 'User friendly' should be hyphenated as 'user-friendly'. 'Feature' should be plural 'features' to agree with 'a lot of'. 'Enables' should be 'enable' to agree with plural 'features'. The phrase 'while ago' is unnecessary and incorrect here.