List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và mạch lạc, nhiều phần không thể hiểu được. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi với câu chủ đề rõ ràng, sau đó cung cấp các chi tiết hỗ trợ cụ thể và sử dụng các từ nối để câu trả lời tự nhiên và logic hơn.

例: Yes, I usually make a shopping list before I go to the store. This helps me remember important items and avoid buying unnecessary things. For example, last week I made a list and managed to buy everything I needed without forgetting anything.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn không rõ ràng và không trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi. Bạn nên bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề trả lời câu hỏi, sau đó giải thích chi tiết cụ thể về việc bạn có làm danh sách cho công việc hay không và hiệu quả của nó.

例: Yes, I often make lists for my work because it helps me stay organized and focused. For instance, when preparing for exams, I write down important tasks and check them off as I complete them, which improves my productivity.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn không có nội dung rõ ràng và không liên quan đến câu hỏi. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, đưa ra lý do cụ thể tại sao một số người không thích làm danh sách, kèm theo ví dụ hoặc giải thích.

例: Some people don't like making lists because they find it boring or time-consuming. They may prefer to remember tasks mentally or feel that lists limit their flexibility.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn có ý chính nhưng thiếu sự rõ ràng và mạch lạc. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và cung cấp các lý do cụ thể, sử dụng từ nối để câu trả lời trôi chảy hơn.

例: I prefer making lists on my phone because it is more convenient and easy to edit. I can add or delete items anytime, and my phone also reminds me about important tasks.

× Yes, I usually make a list B from your shopping.

✓ Yes, I usually make a list before shopping.

The original sentence is unclear and contains incorrect word order and word choice. 'B' and 'from your shopping' do not make sense in this context. The corrected sentence uses proper sentence structure and vocabulary to express the intended meaning.

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✓ It has extra items, but I don't follow any important item.

The original sentence is grammatically incorrect and confusing. 'It had Mr. Arnold an extra just' is nonsensical. The correction clarifies the meaning and corrects the verb tense and sentence structure.

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✓ For example, I sometimes get distracted and forget to buy some things.

The original sentence is incoherent and contains many errors. The correction simplifies and clarifies the intended meaning using proper grammar and vocabulary.

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✓ I make a list because I need to focus and avoid missing important things for my exam by listening.

The original sentence is grammatically incorrect and unclear. The correction restructures the sentence to convey the intended meaning clearly and correctly.

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✓ By listening and writing brief notes, I can manage my time better, which is very important.

The original sentence is confusing and contains many errors. The correction clarifies the meaning and corrects grammar and vocabulary.

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✓ Some people don't like making lists.

The original sentence is incorrect and unclear. The correction uses proper vocabulary and sentence structure to express the intended meaning.

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✓ They find it boring or unnecessary.

The original sentence is nonsensical. The correction provides a plausible intended meaning with correct grammar.

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✓ They prefer to remember things without writing them down.

The original sentence is incoherent. The correction interprets the likely intended meaning and expresses it clearly.

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✓ Some people think making lists is a waste of time.

The original sentence is incomplete and unclear. The correction provides a meaningful sentence related to the question.

× I prefer making list on my phone because it more convenient and asset price then I can easily at all.

✓ I prefer making lists on my phone because it is more convenient and accessible, and I can easily add or delete items anytime.

The original sentence has errors in quantifiers ('making list' should be 'making lists'), missing verbs ('it more convenient' should be 'it is more convenient'), and unclear phrases ('asset price' is incorrect). The correction fixes these issues for clarity and correctness.

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✓ I can delete items anytime, and the phone also provides reminders, which is better than paper lists.

The original sentence is confusing and grammatically incorrect. The correction clarifies the meaning and corrects grammar and vocabulary.