List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答表达了基本意思，但句子结构较为简单且有语法错误，如“this helped me to remind me”重复且不自然。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并使用更自然的表达方式。

例: Yes, I always make a shopping list, either on my phone or on paper. It helps me remember exactly what I need to buy and saves me time.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误，如“some list”应为“some lists”，以及时态不一致。表达不够清晰，建议使用更准确的词汇和时态，并具体说明“recognize my life better”的含义。

例: Yes, I often make lists for my work and studies. I find it very helpful because it helps me organize my tasks and manage my time more effectively.

提案: 回答中断句不连贯，且有语法错误，如“the reasons for that phenomenon is”应为“are”，以及“make some lists”不自然。建议使用连贯的句子结构，避免口语化的停顿，并准确表达观点。

例: I think some people dislike making lists because they find it troublesome, while others prefer to rely on their memory and feel they don't need lists.

提案: 回答中有语法和用词错误，如“some list”应为“lists”，“for right or look”表达不清晰。建议使用正确的词汇和表达方式，清楚说明手机列清单的便利性。

例: I prefer making lists on my phone because it's very convenient to write and check them anytime. Also, I don't have to worry about losing the list.

× Yes and always make my shopping list on my phone or just write it down on the paper when I go shopping and this helped me to remind me exactly what I need to buy an save my time.

✓ Yes, I always make my shopping list on my phone or just write it down on paper when I go shopping, and this helps me to remind myself exactly what I need to buy and save my time.

句中缺少主语“I”，且“helped”时态不对，应为一般现在时“helps”，另外“an save”应为“and save”，还有“remind me”应为“remind myself”，因为是反身动作。

× Yes, I like to make some list for my work or study and I think that making list is very beneficial for me because it helped me to recognize my life better.

✓ Yes, I like to make some lists for my work or study and I think that making lists is very beneficial for me because it helps me to recognize my life better.

“list”应为复数“lists”，因为前面用了“some”，且“helped”时态应为一般现在时“helps”。

× I think the reasons for that phenomenon is that many people can't be bothered to make a list. Well, others. Can always remember the things in their mind, so they don't need to make some lists.

✓ I think the reasons for that phenomenon are that many people can't be bothered to make a list. Well, others can always remember things in their mind, so they don't need to make lists.

主语“reasons”是复数，谓语动词应为“are”而非“is”。“the things”中“the”多余，应为“things”。“some lists”前面不需要“some”，直接用“lists”即可。

× I prefer to make some list on my phone and I think that making the list on the phone is so convenient for right or look. You don't need to worry about losing the list on your phone.

✓ I prefer to make some lists on my phone and I think that making the list on the phone is so convenient for writing or looking. You don't need to worry about losing the list on your phone.

“some list”应为复数“some lists”。“right or look”应为“writing or looking”，原词拼写错误。