List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答表达了做购物清单的必要性，但语法和句子结构不够自然，且表达不够连贯。建议练习使用正确的时态和句子结构，并用连接词使表达更流畅。

例: Yes, I always make a list when I go shopping because it helps me remember what I need to buy and saves me a lot of time.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和不完整的句子，表达不清晰。建议学习如何构建完整句子，并用连接词清楚地表达原因和效果。

例: Sometimes I make a list for my work, especially when the tasks are difficult. It helps me clarify the steps I need to follow.

提案: 回答不完整且语法错误较多，表达含糊。建议练习用完整句子表达观点，并具体说明原因。

例: Maybe some people don't like making lists because they feel confused or overwhelmed by them.

提案: 回答中语法和表达不清晰，句子断断续续。建议练习连贯表达，明确比较纸质和手机清单的优缺点。

例: I prefer making lists on my phone because it lasts longer and can remind me easily, unlike paper lists which can be lost.

× Yes, I really need a list to when I'm shopping because it can help me.

✓ Yes, I really need a list when I'm shopping because it can help me.

句中 'to when' 结构不正确，'to' 后面不应直接接动词的-ing形式，正确用法是直接用 'when' 引导时间状语从句。

× Think about and remember what something would I need to buy and it can save many times.

✓ I think about and remember what I need to buy, and it can save me a lot of time.

原句结构混乱，缺少主语，且时态和词序错误。应补充主语 'I'，调整词序，并用正确的时态表达。

× Sometimes I need make a list for my work.

✓ Sometimes I need to make a list for my work.

动词 'need' 后面接动词时应加不定式 'to'，缺少 'to' 导致语法错误。

× Especially something. More difficult.

✓ Especially when something is more difficult.

原句断裂，缺少谓语和完整句子结构，应补充连接词和谓语使句子完整。

× And it can help me clear.

✓ And it can help me be clear.

动词 'help' 后面应接动词不定式或形容词，'clear' 作为形容词时需加 'be'，否则句子不完整。

× The South of.

✓ The sort of.

原句 'The South of' 无意义，推测为 'The sort of'，表示 '那种'，应更正为正确表达。

× The steps of working.

✓ the steps of working.

此处应与前句连贯，首字母小写，且表达完整。

× Maybe I sing some people.

✓ Maybe some people.

'I sing' 是错误的表达，可能是拼写错误，应删除 'I sing' 只保留 'Maybe some people'。

× Feel more confusion from this list.

✓ feel more confused by this list.

'confusion' 是名词，需用形容词 'confused' 来描述人的感受，且介词应为 'by'。

× Yes, I prefer making list.

✓ Yes, I prefer making a list.

'list' 是可数名词，单数时需加冠词 'a'。

× On my form because the paper and maybe.

✓ On my phone because paper may be lost.

'form' 应为 'phone'，且句子不完整，需补充完整表达。

× Last.

✓ lost.

'Last' 应为 'lost'，表示 '丢失'，原句拼写错误。

× And. The phone can remind easily.

✓ And the phone can remind me easily.

句子断裂，缺少宾语 'me'，且不应有多余的句号。