List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Ответ должен быть более структурированным и ясным. Избегайте слов-паразитов и нечетких выражений, таких как "uh" и "sometimes because I get confused". Лучше прямо ответить и объяснить причину.

例: Yes, I usually make a shopping list because it helps me stay organized and avoid forgetting items.

提案: Ответ не ясен и содержит грамматические ошибки. Следует использовать полные предложения и объяснять, почему список работает или нет. Также избегайте повторений.

例: Yes, I usually make a list for my work, and it helps me complete tasks efficiently.

提案: Ответ непонятен и не соответствует вопросу. Нужно дать ясное объяснение, почему некоторые люди не любят составлять списки, используя связные предложения и подходящую лексику.

例: Some people don't like making lists because they find it time-consuming or prefer to remember things mentally.

提案: Ответ содержит грамматические ошибки и нечеткие выражения. Следует использовать правильные конструкции и объяснить преимущества использования телефона для списков.

例: I prefer to make a list on my phone because it is convenient and I always have my phone with me.

× Yes I do, but uh, sometimes because I get confused.

✓ Yes, I do, but sometimes I get confused.

The original sentence is incomplete and awkward due to the phrase 'sometimes because I get confused' lacking a main clause. The correction removes 'because' and forms a complete sentence: 'sometimes I get confused.' This improves clarity and sentence structure.

× Yes, I usually make, at least for my work. And it's work.

✓ Yes, I usually make a list, at least for my work. And it works.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. 'I usually make, at least for my work' lacks an object; adding 'a list' clarifies the meaning. 'And it's work' is incorrect; it should be 'And it works' to indicate effectiveness. This correction improves sentence completeness and meaning.

× I think the cause. As they are lazy to Tuesdays.

✓ I think the cause is that they are lazy on Tuesdays.

The original sentences are incomplete and unclear. 'I think the cause' lacks a complement. 'As they are lazy to Tuesdays' misuses the preposition 'to' and is unclear. The correction combines the ideas into one sentence with proper structure and preposition: 'lazy on Tuesdays.' This improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× I prefer to make a list on my phone because it's convenient and your make list only's next to you.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because it's convenient and your list is always next to you.

The original sentence misuses 'your make list only's next to you,' which is ungrammatical. The correction replaces it with 'your list is always next to you,' correcting pronoun use and sentence structure for clarity and correctness.