List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Попробуйте строить свои ответы более связно и грамматически правильно. Используйте связующие слова, чтобы сделать речь более естественной и понятной.

例: Yes, I usually make a list when I shop, especially if I need to buy many items. It helps me stay organized and not forget anything important.

提案: Старайтесь отвечать прямо на вопрос и использовать полные предложения. Избегайте неясных выражений и старайтесь структурировать ответ логично.

例: I don't have a job currently, so I don't make lists for work. However, when I was studying, I made daily to-do lists to manage my tasks effectively.

提案: Расширяйте свои ответы, добавляя причины и примеры, используя связующие слова для плавности речи.

例: Some people don't like making lists because they find it stressful and time-consuming. For example, they might feel pressured to complete all tasks on the list.

提案: Работайте над грамматикой и связностью речи. Используйте полные предложения и объясняйте свои предпочтения более подробно.

例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it's more convenient and dynamic. I can easily add or remove items whenever I want.

× Yeah, make a list when I show where it's necessary, but when it's not.

✓ Yeah, I make a list when I shop where it's necessary, but not when it's not.

The original sentence lacks a subject and verb agreement, making it unclear. Adding 'I' and correcting the verb form clarifies the meaning and improves sentence structure.

× For me personally to make a list when I shop it.

✓ For me personally, making a list when I shop is difficult.

The original sentence is incomplete and awkward. Changing it to a gerund phrase with a clear subject and verb improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Take a lot of thoughts.

✓ It takes a lot of thought.

The original sentence lacks a subject and uses 'thoughts' incorrectly. Adding 'It' as the subject and using the uncountable noun 'thought' makes the sentence grammatically correct.

× In my mind and it's difficult for me.

✓ In my mind, and it's difficult for me.

The original sentence is a fragment. Adding a comma connects it properly to the previous sentence, improving readability.

× To be honest, I don't work so I don't make a list for my work, but I'm sure in an eye.

✓ To be honest, I don't work, so I don't make a list for my work, but I'm sure in the past,

The phrase 'I'm sure in an eye' is incorrect and unclear. Replacing it with 'I'm sure in the past' fits the context better and corrects the modal verb usage.

× I used to have a list for my studies.

✓ I used to have a list for my studies.

This sentence is correct and needs no correction.

× Would I need to do?

✓ of what I needed to do.

The original sentence is a fragment and unclear. Completing the phrase clarifies the meaning and corrects the sentence structure.

× For this day specially.

✓ for that day especially.

The phrase 'For this day specially' is awkward. Changing 'this' to 'that' and 'specially' to 'especially' improves naturalness and correctness.

× I think it's difficult and stressful thing for them.

✓ I think it's a difficult and stressful thing for them.

The original sentence misses the article 'a' before the noun phrase. Adding 'a' corrects the adjective-noun structure.

× I'd like to prefer.

✓ I'd prefer

The phrase 'I'd like to prefer' is redundant and incorrect. 'I'd prefer' is the correct and concise form.

× To make notes on my phone.

✓ to make notes on my phone.

This fragment is acceptable as a continuation but should be connected properly to the previous sentence for clarity.

× It got it more useful and.

✓ It's more useful and

The original sentence is ungrammatical and incomplete. Correcting 'It got it' to 'It's' and completing the sentence improves clarity.

× Dynamic at the sign at the same time.

✓ dynamic at the same time.

The phrase 'at the sign' is incorrect and unnecessary. Removing it makes the sentence clearer and grammatically correct.