List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答不够连贯，语法和词汇使用存在较大问题，导致表达不清晰。建议练习使用简单明了的句子结构，避免语法错误，并且用恰当的词汇表达购物时列清单的原因。

例: Yes, I usually make a shopping list because I often forget what I want to buy. Making a list helps me remember the items I need and saves time when I shop.

提案: 回答中语法混乱，表达不清楚。建议用简单句直接回答问题，并用连接词组织句子，说明你如何使用清单帮助工作。

例: Yes, I usually make a list for my work, but I don't write it on paper. Before I start, I review my tasks to help me organize my work better. This method has really improved my efficiency.

提案: 回答内容不完整且表达混乱。建议明确说明原因，使用连词连接观点，并举具体例子。

例: Some people don't like making lists because they find it inconvenient and time-consuming. For example, writing lists on paper can be uncomfortable if they have hand pain.

提案: 回答语法和词汇错误较多，表达不清晰。建议直接表达偏好，并说明原因，使用简单句和连接词。

例: I prefer to make lists on paper because it feels more natural to me. I have been doing it since I was a kid, so it is a habit I still keep.

× Yes, because I usually forget the war I want to buy, making only say help me remember order items I need and save time when I. Ed does. Sharp Doll.

✓ Yes, because I usually forget the things I want to buy, so making a list helps me remember the items I need and saves time when I shop.

句子结构混乱，表达不清晰。应将句子拆分并调整顺序，使意思明确。建议使用连词“so”连接原因和结果，动词时态和主谓一致。

× Yes, I usually writer only is not on paper. Before I start my work, you help me remember all the tasks I need to complete an Anki with. Let me organize. Make it only still really improved my affection.

✓ Yes, I usually write my list, but not on paper. Before I start my work, it helps me remember all the tasks I need to complete and lets me organize. It has really improved my efficiency.

句子结构混乱，词语使用错误。应调整句子顺序，使用正确的动词形式和代词，表达清晰完整。

× Some people don't like making a list or becaused they find it inconvenient and time and time consuming.

✓ Some people don't like making a list because they find it inconvenient and time-consuming.

错误使用连词“or”和拼写错误“becaused”。应使用正确连词“because”表示原因，且“time-consuming”应连写。

× For example, or writing or lays the knee, knee pain and some paper.

✓ For example, writing lists can cause knee pain or discomfort when holding paper.

句子不完整且词语混乱，应补充完整表达，调整词序，使句子通顺。

× I would personally go from the formal warrant becauses I think make a list on paper.

✓ I would personally prefer to make a list on paper because I think it is more formal.

错误使用连词“becauses”，应为“because”，且表达不完整，需补充完整句子。

× Oh is should editional thing things that I was a kid I still do.

✓ It is a traditional thing that I have done since I was a kid and still do now.

句子结构混乱，词语拼写错误，应调整词序并使用正确词汇表达完整意思。