List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答时语法和表达不够自然，有些句子结构混乱，建议简化句子结构，避免重复表达，并使用更地道的表达方式。

例: I usually don't make a shopping list because I prefer to remember what I need. Making a list takes extra time, so I find it easier to just shop without one.

提案: 回答内容较完整，但句子结构重复且有语法错误，建议使用连贯的句子并注意时态和语法的准确性。

例: Yes, I make lists for work because they help me plan my tasks for the week or month. This way, I know what to do each day and avoid feeling rushed.

提案: 表达不够清晰，语法错误较多，建议简化句子，明确表达观点，并使用连接词使内容更连贯。

例: I think some people dislike making lists because they feel it takes too much time. Others believe it's unnecessary since they can remember tasks in their heads.

提案: 回答中有重复和语法错误，建议简化表达，注意时态一致，并使用更自然的连接词。

例: I used to prefer making lists on paper because I couldn't use my phone at school. But now, I prefer using my phone since it's convenient and I don't have to worry about losing paper.

× Actually I'm not a person that will make a list because I think I can memorize in my head and also I think making a list will cost me a little bit time so I would prefer just go shopping.

✓ Actually, I'm not a person who will make a list because I think I can memorize it in my head and also I think making a list will cost me a little bit of time, so I would prefer just to go shopping.

这里的错误是单复数问题，'a person that' 应改为 'a person who'，因为指人时用who；'cost me a little bit time' 应改为 'cost me a little bit of time'，需要加介词of来连接量词和名词；'prefer just go shopping' 应改为 'prefer just to go shopping'，动词prefer后面接不定式。

× Oh yeah, when, when it comes to work, I will make a list because if I do that, I can know what I'm going to do like maybe next week or next month end.

✓ Oh yeah, when it comes to work, I will make a list because if I do that, I can know what I'm going to do, like maybe next week or the end of next month.

这里的错误是情态动词和表达方式问题，'next month end' 应改为 'the end of next month'，表达更准确自然。

× I can have a weekly plan so that I can know what can I do today or tomorrow and then I will not be really rush.

✓ I can have a weekly plan so that I can know what I can do today or tomorrow and then I will not be really rushed.

这里的错误是时态和语态问题，'what can I do' 应改为 'what I can do'，陈述句语序；'will not be really rush' 应改为 'will not be really rushed'，rush作为形容词时应使用过去分词形式。

× I would say it depends on different situation.

✓ I would say it depends on different situations.

这里的错误是介词和单复数问题，'depends on different situation' 中 situation 应为复数 situations，因为表示多种情况。

× First of all, I think some people might think they if like if they need to make a list, it will cost them a lot of time.

✓ First of all, I think some people might think that if they need to make a list, it will cost them a lot of time.

这里的错误是代词使用，'think they if like if' 语序混乱，应改为 'think that if'，去掉多余词语，使句子通顺。

× And for the other person, I think they will just say that it's really like. Is not a stop mandatory because they can just memorizing their head.

✓ And for other people, I think they will just say that it's really not mandatory because they can just memorize it in their head.

这里的错误是形容词和动词形式，'Is not a stop mandatory' 应改为 'it's really not mandatory'，表达否定；'memorizing their head' 应改为 'memorize it in their head'，动词用原形，且加介词in。

× Oh wow. Uh, in the past I will prefer make it on the paper because I cannot use my cell phone in school.

✓ Oh wow. Uh, in the past I would prefer to make it on paper because I could not use my cell phone in school.

这里的错误是情态动词和动词形式，过去习惯用would prefer，且动词后应接不定式to make；'on the paper' 应改为 'on paper'，习惯用法。

× But recently I prefer using cell phone because I can just take take a look at my phone anywhere and I don't need to bring a paper because the paper will might get lost.

✓ But recently I prefer using my cell phone because I can just take a look at my phone anywhere and I don't need to bring paper because the paper might get lost.

这里的错误是介词和冠词使用，'take take' 是重复，应删去一个；'bring a paper' 应改为 'bring paper'，不可数名词不加冠词；'will might' 是重复助动词，应去掉will。