Singing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答表达了喜欢唱歌的原因，但语法和用词不够准确，句子结构较为混乱。建议注意动词搭配，如“like singing”而非“like singing songs”，并简化句子结构，使表达更自然流畅。

例: Yes, I really enjoy singing because it helps me relax and boosts my confidence when I perform on stage. Singing makes me feel happy and refreshed.

提案: 回答中存在多处语法错误和词汇使用不当，如“studied seeing”应为“studied singing”，句子不连贯。建议加强语法基础，使用正确的时态和词汇，并注意句子逻辑连贯。

例: Yes, I took singing lessons last winter. My teacher taught me many useful skills and knowledge, which helped me improve a lot.

提案: 回答表达了想为父母唱歌的意愿，但语法错误较多，句子不完整且表达不清晰。建议练习完整句子表达，注意主谓一致和词序，增强表达的准确性。

例: I want to sing for my parents because they work very hard to support our family. I think singing for them can show my appreciation and help them relax.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误，如“sing songs”应为“singing”，以及动词形式错误。建议注意动词形式和句子结构，使表达更自然流畅。

例: Absolutely, I believe singing can bring happiness because it helps us relax, feel excited, and enjoy the atmosphere in our daily lives.

× I'm very like singing songs in my daily life because I think it can relax my mind and display my confidence in the stage and it makes me very happy when I sing songs.

✓ I really like singing songs in my daily life because I think it can relax my mind and display my confidence on the stage and it makes me very happy when I sing songs.

这里“very like”是不正确的搭配，应该用副词“really”来修饰动词“like”。此外，“in the stage”应改为“on the stage”，但这属于介词错误，不在本条修正范围内。

× Yes, I studied seeing last winter.

✓ Yes, I studied singing last winter.

这里“seeing”是拼写错误，应为“singing”，且动词形式应为动名词形式，表示学习某项技能。

× I found a good teacher because she taught me many experience and knowledge about things skills.

✓ I found a good teacher because she taught me a lot of experience and knowledge about skills.

“many experience”不正确，experience是不可数名词，应使用“a lot of”或“much”修饰；“things skills”表达不清，应简化为“skills”。

× She helps me a lot and I felt very useful to me.

✓ She helps me a lot and I feel very useful.

“felt”时态错误，应与前文时态一致用现在时“feel”；“useful to me”表达不自然，直接用“feel very useful”即可。

× Who do you want to sing for?

✓ Who do you want to sing for?

此句无语法错误，符合语法规范。

× I want to sing songs to my parents because I think. They are work hard and very not easy to maintain my home.

✓ I want to sing songs to my parents because I think they work hard and it is not easy to maintain my home.

“They are work hard”语法错误，应为“They work hard”；“very not easy”表达不正确，应为“it is not easy”。

× I think they are very tired so I want to sing for them.

✓ I think they are very tired, so I want to sing for them.

此句缺少逗号，连接两个分句时应加逗号以增强句子连贯性。

× Absolutely, I think sing songs can bring happiness to people because it allows us relax and make us feel exciting and enjoy the atmosphere in the daily life.

✓ Absolutely, I think singing songs can bring happiness to people because it allows us to relax and makes us feel excited and enjoy the atmosphere in daily life.

“sing songs”应改为动名词“singing songs”；“allows us relax”缺少不定式“to”；“make us feel exciting”应为“makes us feel excited”，因为“excited”是形容人的情绪；“in the daily life”中“the”不必要，应为“in daily life”。