Singing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答较为自然且内容相关，但句子结构稍显重复，且部分表达不够地道。建议使用更简洁的句子结构，避免冗余，同时丰富词汇表达。

例: Yes, I enjoy singing because it helps me relax and clear my mind. Moreover, singing songs by my favorite band gives me a great sense of accomplishment.

提案: 回答表达了观点，但语法和用词存在错误，且句子连接不够流畅。建议注意语法准确性，使用连接词使表达更连贯。

例: No, I haven't taken any formal singing lessons. I just sing casually to relax, even though I might not sound very good. I don't plan to learn singing seriously.

提案: 回答中出现语法错误和重复，表达不够清晰。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并使用恰当的连接词使表达更流畅。

例: I prefer to sing for my friends and family because I feel comfortable with them. Singing in front of strangers makes me feel nervous and uneasy.

提案: 回答内容丰富，但句子结构混乱，语法错误较多。建议分句表达观点，使用连接词使逻辑更清晰，同时注意语法准确。

例: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness. It allows people to express negative emotions and relieve stress from work, school, or family. Therefore, singing helps people feel happier and more accomplished.

× I think singing can help me to relax myself and refresh my brain.

✓ I think singing can help me relax myself and refresh my brain.

在动词help后面，通常直接接动词原形，而不是to do形式。这里应使用动词原形relax。

× I just sing in my own ways. It may be not sounds that great but I think I just use singing to relax myself.

✓ I just sing in my own way. It may not sound that great but I think I just use singing to relax myself.

短语in my own way中，way应为单数形式。动词sound前不需要be动词may，正确表达为may not sound。

× My friends or my families.

✓ My friends or my family.

family作为集合名词通常用单数形式，families指多个家庭，语境中应使用单数family。

× Sitting in front of a group of people who I doesn't know can make me I don't know can make me feel stressful and uncomfortable.

✓ Sitting in front of a group of people who I don't know can make me feel stressed and uncomfortable.

关系代词who指代复数people，谓语动词应使用do not/don't而非doesn't。形容词stressful用来形容事物，描述人的感受应使用过去分词stressed。句子中重复部分应删除。

× I think singing is a good way to express your negative emotions, can help you relaxing yourself to express the stress or pressure from the companies, from the school or families.

✓ I think singing is a good way to express your negative emotions and can help you relax yourself to relieve the stress or pressure from companies, school, or family.

连接两个谓语时应使用连词and。动词help后接动词原形relax。表达缓解压力应使用relieve。介词from后不加定冠词the，且companies、school、family应保持一致的复数或单数形式。

× My friends or my families.

✓ My friends or my family.

families指多个家庭，语境中应使用单数family，且my family更符合习惯用法。