Singing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答中多次将"singing"误说成"seeing"，导致表达不准确。建议注意发音和用词，确保回答紧扣问题。回答应直接表达喜欢唱歌的原因，并避免重复和冗长。

例: Yes, I like singing because it helps me relax and forget my stress. Singing allows me to express my emotions and feel happier.

提案: 回答较为清晰，但可以更自然地连接信息，避免口头语"UH"。建议使用连词使句子更流畅。

例: Yes, I have. I am currently studying art management, and my course requires me to learn singing and drama skills, which I find very interesting.

提案: 回答中语法错误较多，如主谓不一致。建议直接回答问题，使用正确的语法结构，并用连接词丰富内容。

例: I want to sing for my parents and my boyfriend because they have always supported and motivated me in my life and studies, and I really appreciate them.

提案: 再次出现"seeing"代替"singing"的错误，影响表达准确性。建议注意发音，避免口头语，使用更具体的例子。

例: Absolutely. From my perspective, singing is a great way to release stress and express emotions. For example, when people have a heavy workload, they often sing to feel happier and more relaxed.

× I prefer seeing rather than any other activities to relax myself because when I am seeing I always forget a lot of stress and pressure.

✓ I prefer singing rather than any other activities to relax myself because when I am singing I always forget a lot of stress and pressure.

这里的动词应该是表示唱歌的动词'sing'的现在分词形式'singing'，而不是'seeing'（看见）。'prefer'后面接动名词形式表示喜欢做某事。

× What's more, seeing helps me put my feet up and let my hair down.

✓ What's more, singing helps me put my feet up and let my hair down.

同上，'seeing'应为'singing'，因为句意是唱歌帮助放松。

× From my perspective, seeing is the perfect way to release stress and express people, uh, emotions.

✓ From my perspective, singing is the perfect way to release stress and express people's, uh, emotions.

这里'seeing'应为'singing'，且'express people emotions'应为'express people's emotions'，表示表达人们的情感。

× Exactly, my parents and my boyfriend is due to the fact that they gave me much more support and motivation on my life and study.

✓ Exactly, my parents and my boyfriend are the reason because they gave me much more support and motivation in my life and study.

主语是复数（my parents and my boyfriend），谓语动词应使用复数形式'are'，而不是'is'。另外，'due to the fact that'用法不当，改为'the reason because'更合适。介词'on my life and study'应为'in my life and study'。