Singing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答表达了喜欢唱歌的原因，但语言有些口语化且结构不够紧凑。建议使用更自然的表达方式，避免重复，并且注意语法一致性。

例: Yes, I really enjoy singing because it always lifts my mood and helps me relax after a long day.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清的问题，内容不够具体。建议明确说明学习唱歌的经历，并使用正确的语法和词汇。

例: Yes, when I was a child, my mother enrolled me in singing classes where I learned breathing techniques to improve my voice control.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和表达不流畅的问题，建议简化句子结构，明确表达想为家人唱歌的原因，并减少口语填充词。

例: I would like to sing for my grandparents to express my love and gratitude for their kindness and support.

提案: 回答中出现了不相关或错误的词汇，表达不清晰。建议使用准确的词汇，清楚地说明唱歌如何带来快乐，并避免使用无意义的词语。

例: Definitely. Singing can improve people's mood because it allows them to express their feelings and enjoy the rhythm and melody of the music.

× Singing definitely is my cup of tea, mainly because it always provides me with a good mood, cheer me up and help me recharge.

✓ Singing definitely is my cup of tea, mainly because it always provides me with a good mood, cheers me up and helps me recharge.

动词在第三人称单数时需要加 -s 或 -es。这里的主语是 it，动词 cheer 和 help 应该用第三人称单数形式 cheers 和 helps。

× my mom let me attend something classes, especially teaching us how to produce sounds by our belly, which will make singing easier and more.

✓ my mom let me attend some classes, especially teaching us how to produce sounds by our belly, which will make singing easier and better.

something 用于不确定的事物，不能修饰可数名词 classes，应该用 some。并且句尾的 more 用法不当，改为 better 更合适。

× my grandpa and grandma which because they are quite old seeing become the thing that I can express my emotion to them and also umm, represent my gratitude on for their uh, kindness to us.

✓ my grandpa and grandma because they are quite old, which becomes the thing that I can use to express my emotions to them and also, umm, represent my gratitude for their kindness to us.

which because 结构错误，应拆分为 because 和 which 两个从句。seeing 用法不当，应改为 which becomes。表达情感时 emotion 应用复数 emotions。gratitude 后不加介词 on。

× Through the strong Dragons and kitschy lyrics, a people's emotion can be changed to go along with the UMM music style.

✓ Through the strong drums and kitschy lyrics, a person's emotion can be changed to go along with the UMM music style.

Dragons 应为 drums（鼓），people's emotion 用法错误，应为 person's emotion，表示单个人的情感。