Singing— Part 1 採点レポート
会話
Part 1
試験官
Do you like singing? Why?
受験者
Do you like singing wise?
試験官
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
受験者
Have you ever learned how to sing?
試験官
Who do you want to sing for?
受験者
How do you want to sing for?
試験官
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
受験者
Yet I think singing can make people happy, is help to each specimen and can release stress. Many people sing in the show or can do feel better and karaoke.
評価
総合
Part 1
Do you like singing? Why?
スコア: 20.0提案: Câu trả lời của bạn không trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi và có lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trả lời rõ ràng và tự nhiên hơn, tránh lặp lại câu hỏi của giám khảo.
例: Yes, I enjoy singing because it helps me relax and express my emotions.
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
スコア: 15.0提案: Bạn chỉ lặp lại câu hỏi của giám khảo mà không trả lời. Hãy trả lời trực tiếp và cung cấp thêm chi tiết nếu có thể.
例: Yes, I took singing lessons for a year when I was in high school to improve my voice.
Who do you want to sing for?
スコア: 10.0提案: Câu trả lời không đúng với câu hỏi và có lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp và rõ ràng về đối tượng bạn muốn hát cho.
例: I want to sing for my family and friends because they always support me.
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
スコア: 40.0提案: Câu trả lời có ý tưởng tốt nhưng ngữ pháp và từ vựng chưa chính xác, câu chưa mạch lạc. Bạn nên sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và liên kết ý tốt hơn.
例: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness because it helps people relax and reduce stress. For example, many enjoy singing karaoke to feel better.
文法
× Do you like singing wise?
✓ Do you like singing?
The word 'wise' is incorrectly used here as an adverb or adjective modifying 'singing'. It is unnecessary and incorrect in this context. The correct question is simply 'Do you like singing?'. Remove 'wise' to improve clarity and correctness.
× Have you ever learnt how to sing?
✓ Have you ever learned how to sing?
Both 'learnt' and 'learned' are past participles of 'learn', but 'learned' is more commonly used in American English, which fits the context better. The sentence is otherwise correct.
× How do you want to sing for?
✓ Who do you want to sing for?
The question word 'How' is incorrectly used instead of 'Who' to ask about the person the student wants to sing for. 'Who' is the correct pronoun to refer to people in this context.
× Yet I think singing can make people happy, is help to each specimen and can release stress. Many people sing in the show or can do feel better and karaoke.
✓ I think singing can make people happy, helps each person, and can relieve stress. Many people sing in shows or karaoke to feel better.
The original sentence has multiple issues: 'Yet' is unnecessary and confusing; 'is help to each specimen' is incorrect and unclear; 'can release stress' should be 'can relieve stress'; 'sing in the show' should be 'sing in shows'; 'can do feel better' is incorrect and should be 'to feel better'. The corrected sentence improves clarity, grammar, and naturalness.
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