Singing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答较为自然且内容相关，但表达略显重复且部分用词不够准确，如“injury”用词不当。建议简化表达，避免重复，并使用更准确的词汇。

例: Yes, I really enjoy singing because it helps me relax and express my emotions. For instance, when I feel sad, singing cheers me up and makes me feel better.

提案: 回答不完整且有语法错误，如“saying”应为“singing”，句子未完成。建议注意拼写和语法，完整表达观点。

例: No, I have never taken formal singing lessons because I consider singing just a hobby, not something I want to specialize in.

提案: 回答内容具体且结构清晰，但句子连接略显简单，建议使用连接词使表达更流畅。

例: I like to sing for many people. For example, I sing for my mother on Mother's Day and for my father on Father's Day. Also, I often sing for my friends at birthday parties or other celebrations.

提案: 回答表达了观点，但存在拼写错误（seeing应为 singing），句子结构较为简单，建议使用更多连接词和丰富细节。

例: Yes, I am sure that singing can bring happiness to people. For example, when my family and friends gather, we often sing together. It helps us relax and express our feelings, which makes everyone feel joyful.

× I think singing is a kind of act which can relax your body and express your emotion.

✓ I think singing is a kind of act that can relax your body and express your emotion.

这里使用关系代词时，通常用that代替which来引导限制性定语从句，更符合英语习惯。

× I've never learned how to sing because saying is a kind of hobby for me.

✓ I've never learned how to sing because singing is a kind of hobby for me.

原句中'saying'应为'singing'，因为上下文讨论的是唱歌，'saying'是说话的意思，属于用词错误。

× I will never specialize in learning this, so I'm very.

✓ I will never specialize in learning this, so I'm very happy with it as a hobby.

原句不完整，缺少谓语和宾语，导致句子结构错误，需要补充完整表达。

× Because in Mother's Day I will sing for my mother. In Father's Day I will sing for my father.

✓ Because on Mother's Day I will sing for my mother. On Father's Day I will sing for my father.

节日名称前应使用介词'on'，且Mother's Day和Father's Day是固定表达，前面用介词'on'表示具体日期。

× For an example, when my family or my friends with me, we have a little gathering.

✓ For example, when my family or my friends are with me, we have a little gathering.

'For an example'应为'For example'，且缺少动词'are'，导致句子不完整。

× Yes, I'm definitely sure that seeing can bring happiness to people.

✓ Yes, I'm definitely sure that singing can bring happiness to people.

'seeing'应为'singing'，因为上下文讨论的是唱歌，属于用词错误。