Singing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn nên tự nhiên hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như "can makes". Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp và rõ ràng hơn, ví dụ như "I like singing because it makes people feel happier." Ngoài ra, bạn có thể thêm một câu giải thích ngắn gọn để làm câu trả lời phong phú hơn.

例: Yes, I like singing because it makes people feel happier. For example, when I sing, I feel more relaxed and joyful.

提案: Câu trả lời quá ngắn và không rõ ràng. Bạn nên trả lời đầy đủ hơn và sử dụng cấu trúc câu đúng, ví dụ "Yes, I used to learn singing when I was a child." Điều này giúp câu trả lời tự nhiên và hiệu quả hơn.

例: Yes, I used to learn singing when I was a child. I took lessons for about two years to improve my voice.

提案: Câu trả lời có lỗi ngữ pháp và thiếu sự liên kết. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng cấu trúc đúng và thêm liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn. Ví dụ: "I want to sing for my parents because I love them and want to make them happy."

例: I want to sing for my parents because I love them and singing is a way to show my appreciation.

提案: Câu trả lời không rõ nghĩa và có lỗi nghiêm trọng. Bạn nên trả lời rõ ràng, sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp và câu hoàn chỉnh. Ví dụ: "Yes, I think singing can bring happiness because it helps people relax and enjoy themselves."

例: Yes, I think singing can bring happiness because it helps people relax and enjoy themselves, especially during stressful times.

× Says I like singing because singing can makes people feel happier.

✓ I like singing because singing can make people feel happier.

The verb 'make' should be in base form after the modal verb 'can'. 'Can' is followed by the base form of the verb without 's'. Therefore, 'makes' is incorrect here and should be 'make'.

× Says I used to learn.

✓ I used to learn.

The sentence is missing the subject 'I' at the beginning. 'Says' is not necessary here as the student is responding directly. The phrase 'used to learn' is correct for past habitual action.

× I want sing.

✓ I want to sing.

The verb 'want' is followed by the infinitive form 'to sing', not the base verb alone. Therefore, 'I want sing' is incorrect and should be 'I want to sing'.

× I want singing to my parents because I like them.

✓ I want to sing to my parents because I like them.

The verb 'want' should be followed by the infinitive 'to sing', not the gerund 'singing'. Also, 'to my parents' is the correct prepositional phrase indicating the direction of the singing.

× Sex singing relieves.

✓ Singing relieves stress.

The original sentence is unclear and seems to have a typo ('Sex' instead of 'Singing'). The corrected sentence clarifies the meaning and uses proper sentence structure.

× We can make people feel happy now and.

✓ We can make people feel happy now and in the future.

The sentence ends abruptly with 'and'. Adding 'in the future' completes the thought and improves sentence structure.