Singing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答较为自然，但存在语法错误和表达不够准确的问题，如“make me unwind”应为“help me unwind”。建议注意语法准确性，避免重复表达，并使用更地道的表达方式。

例: Yes, I really enjoy singing, especially during special moments like when I'm taking a shower or feeling upset. Singing loudly helps me express my emotions and relax.

提案: 回答中出现了明显的拼写错误（seeing应为singing），且表达重复且不够连贯。建议加强语法和拼写的准确性，避免重复，并使用连接词使表达更流畅。

例: Not really. I'm not a professional singer, and I don't feel the need to take lessons because singing is mainly a way for me to express my feelings and relax. Besides, I sing just for fun, not for money.

提案: 回答中多次出现拼写错误（seeing应为singing），语法不准确（如“sing good”应为“sing well”），表达不够简洁。建议注意拼写和语法，使用更准确的词汇，并简化句子结构。

例: I enjoy singing for my parents because they always listen to me and don't mind whether I sing well or what kind of music I choose. They just encourage and support me.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，如“same do bring happiness”不正确。建议加强句子结构的准确性，使用更清晰的表达，并提供更具体的例子。

例: Yes, definitely. Singing can bring happiness to people. For example, K-pop fans feel joyful when they listen to their favorite music because it connects them with their idols.

× I would like to sing very loudly so that I can express my emotions and make me unwind.

✓ I would like to sing very loudly so that I can express my emotions and make myself unwind.

这里“make me unwind”中的“me”应该用反身代词“myself”，因为动词“make”后面跟的是使役结构，表示让自己放松，需用反身代词。

× I'm not an expert of singing and I think I don't need to learn to sing because I think seeing is a good way to express my emotions and make me unwind.

✓ I'm not an expert at singing and I think I don't need to learn to sing because I think singing is a good way to express my emotions and make myself unwind.

“expert of singing”应改为“expert at singing”，介词用法错误；“seeing”应为“singing”，拼写错误；“make me unwind”应为“make myself unwind”，反身代词使用错误。

× I'm not an expert of singing and I think I don't need to learn to sing because I think seeing is a good way to express my emotions and make me unwind.

✓ I'm not an expert at singing and I think I don't need to learn to sing because I think singing is a good way to express my emotions and make myself unwind.

“expert”后应接介词“at”而非“of”，这是固定搭配。

× I'm really into seeing for my parents because they're always still listening to me and they don't care whether I sing good or not and what kinds of music I sing.

✓ I'm really into singing for my parents because they're always still listening to me and they don't care whether I sing well or not and what kinds of music I sing.

“seeing”应为“singing”，拼写错误；“sing good”应为“sing well”，副词修饰动词。

× I'm really into seeing for my parents because they're always still listening to me and they don't care whether I sing good or not and what kinds of music I sing.

✓ I'm really into singing for my parents because they're always still listening to me and they don't care whether I sing well or not and what kinds of music I sing.

“into”后面应接动名词“singing”，而非“seeing”。

× They just encourage me and support for me.

✓ They just encourage me and support me.

动词“support”后不需要介词“for”，直接加宾语。

× I think same do bring happiness to people.

✓ I think singing does bring happiness to people.

“same”应为“singing”，拼写错误；主语是单数，谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式“does”。