Singing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答语法和表达不够清晰，存在重复和错误，建议练习简单句的正确表达，并避免重复。可以尝试用更自然的表达方式说明喜欢唱歌的原因。

例: Yes, I like singing because it makes me feel happy and relaxed.

提案: 回答中语法错误较多，句子不完整，建议练习完整句子的表达，并使用连接词使句子更连贯。

例: Yes, I have learned to sing for a few years. Nowadays, I sing every day because it helps me feel happy.

提案: 回答内容不明确，表达混乱，建议先明确回答问题，再用具体细节支持，注意句子结构和词汇的准确使用。

例: I want to sing for myself because it is a good way to relieve stress and forget my worries.

提案: 回答较为简单，缺少具体细节和连贯性，建议增加具体原因或例子，并使用连接词使表达更流畅。

例: Yes, I think singing brings happiness to people because it helps them feel relaxed and joyful, especially after a stressful day.

× Yes, I like singing because I enjoy it and it it helped me happy Ness I.

✓ Yes, I like singing because I enjoy it and it helps me happiness.

句子结构混乱，'it it helped me happy Ness I'无意义且语序错误。应调整为'it helps me happiness'，表达喜欢唱歌因为它带来快乐。

× Yes, I have learned. Sing few years.

✓ Yes, I have learned to sing a few years ago.

时态使用不当，'have learned'后应接不定式或明确时间状语，且缺少介词'to'和冠词'a'。

× This day I always uh, singing everyday because it helped me feel happy.

✓ These days I always sing every day because it helps me feel happy.

'This day'应为复数形式'these days'表示最近一段时间，'singing'应改为动词原形'sing'，时态应与现在习惯相符。

× I want to see myself because he good way to help me relieve strength and forget worries.

✓ I want to sing for myself because it is a good way to help me relieve stress and forget worries.

'see myself'应为'sing for myself'，'he'错误代指，应为'it'，'strength'应为'stress'，表达缓解压力。

× Yes, I think singing is bringing happiness to people because it helps people feel happy and relaxed. Umm, when?

✓ Yes, I think singing brings happiness to people because it helps people feel happy and relaxed.

'is bringing'时态不符合一般事实陈述，应使用一般现在时'brings'。