Singing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答时语法和用词不够准确，句子结构不够清晰，且有拼写错误。建议注意句子连贯性，避免语法错误，并使用更准确的词汇表达情感。

例: Yes, I really enjoy singing because it helps me relax and express my emotions. For example, when I'm feeling stressed, listening to my favorite songs lifts my mood and makes me feel happier.

提案: 回答不连贯，表达不清晰，语法错误较多。建议练习完整句子表达，注意时态和句子结构，避免口语填充词。

例: Yes, I started learning how to sing when I was 11 years old. I learned through online tutorials on the Internet.

提案: 表达不清晰，句子结构混乱，词汇使用不当。建议简洁明了地表达观点，使用正确的连接词，并注意语法准确性。

例: I would like to sing for my family and close friends because they are supportive and appreciate my efforts. Their encouragement motivates me to improve.

提案: 回答中有拼写错误，且表达稍显简单。建议使用更丰富的词汇和句型，增强表达的逻辑性和准确性。

例: Yes, I believe singing can definitely bring happiness to people. It allows individuals to express their emotions and serves as an effective way to relieve stress.

× For example when I'm feeling stressed, seeing it my favorite songs lives my mood and makes me feel happier.

✓ For example, when I'm feeling stressed, singing my favorite songs lifts my mood and makes me feel happier.

这里'seeing'应为'singing'，因为表达的是唱歌的动作，动名词形式表示习惯性动作。'lives'应为'lifts'，表示提升心情。

× And yes, I have learned how to think when I was. Mm-hmm. 11 years old.

✓ And yes, I learned how to sing when I was 11 years old.

'have learned'改为简单过去时'learned'，因为动作发生在过去具体时间。'think'应为'sing'，符合语境。

× I learn on the Internet.

✓ I learned on the Internet.

描述过去学习经历，动词应使用过去时。

× I would like to sing for my family and close friends, same for them, feel special because they aren't supportive and appreciate my efforts which motivated me to prefer better.

✓ I would like to sing for my family and close friends so that they feel special because they are supportive and appreciate my efforts, which motivate me to improve.

'same for them'用法错误，应使用' so that they'表示目的。'aren't supportive'应为'are supportive'，语义相反。'prefer better'应为'improve'，表达提升自己。

× Seeing allows individuals to express their emotions and can be a great way to relieve stress.

✓ Singing allows individuals to express their emotions and can be a great way to relieve stress.

'Seeing'应为'Singing'，因为主题是唱歌，动名词形式表示动作。