Singing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is understandable but could be more natural and concise. Try to avoid redundancy and improve sentence structure. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. For example, instead of repeating 'I like singing', you can say 'I enjoy singing, especially when I'm home alone listening to music.'

例: Yes, I enjoy singing, especially when I'm home alone listening to music. Although I may not be very good, singing makes me happy and relaxed.

提案: Your answer is clear but the grammar needs improvement. Use correct verb forms and sentence structure. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas. For example, 'I have never had a singing teacher, but I often sing by myself at home.'

例: No, I have never had a singing teacher because I didn't have the opportunity. However, I often sing by myself at home for fun.

提案: Your answer is a bit unclear and contains filler words. Try to be more direct and structured. Use linking words to explain your reasons clearly. For example, 'I prefer to sing only for myself because I feel shy singing in public. Therefore, my home is my comfort zone.'

例: I prefer to sing only for myself because I feel shy singing in public. Therefore, my home is my comfort zone where I can sing freely.

提案: Your answer has good ideas but needs clearer expression and better grammar. Avoid incomplete sentences and use linking words to connect your points. For example, 'Yes, I believe singing can always bring happiness because when people feel bored or sad, singing or listening to music can improve their mood.'

例: Yes, I believe singing can always bring happiness because when people feel bored or sad, singing or listening to music can improve their mood and make them feel better.

× I like listening music and when I am home alone I always listen to music and also I'm singing.

✓ I like listening to music and when I am home alone I always listen to music and also I sing.

The verb 'listen' requires the preposition 'to' when followed by an object, so it should be 'listening to music'. Also, 'I'm singing' suggests continuous action, but here simple present 'I sing' fits better to express habitual action.

× No, because I did not have some teachers to learn me how to sing song.

✓ No, because I did not have any teachers to teach me how to sing songs.

The phrase 'learn me' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'teach me'. Also, 'some' is not used in negative sentences; 'any' is appropriate. 'Sing song' should be plural 'sing songs' to indicate general activity.

× No, because I did not have some teachers to learn me how to sing song.

✓ No, because I did not have any teachers to teach me how to sing songs.

The pronoun 'me' is correct, but the verb 'learn' is wrongly used. The correct verb is 'teach' when someone instructs another person.

× Just for myself because I'm so shy when I am in public places and seeing something and umm, it's uh, comfort zone for, for myself is home and when I'm home alone.

✓ Just for myself because I'm so shy when I am in public places and seeing things, and umm, my comfort zone is home when I'm home alone.

The phrase 'comfort zone for, for myself is home' is awkward and incorrect. It should be 'my comfort zone is home'. Also, 'seeing something' is vague; 'seeing things' is more natural here.

× Yes always because when you are boring or sad about something you can listen to music or sing a song.

✓ Yes, always because when you are bored or sad about something you can listen to music or sing a song.

The adjective 'boring' describes something that causes boredom, but here the feeling of the person is meant, so 'bored' is correct.

× Maybe it was happy or unhappy song.

✓ Maybe it is a happy or unhappy song.

The sentence refers to a general statement about songs, so present tense 'is' is appropriate. Also, 'song' should be preceded by an article 'a'.

× You always make this happy because a song helps to.

✓ You always feel happy because a song helps you.

The original sentence is incomplete and unclear. 'Make this happy' is incorrect; the intended meaning is 'feel happy'. Also, 'helps to' needs an object; 'helps you' completes the meaning.