Singing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is quite short and contains a grammatical error ('a art' should be 'an art'). To improve, try to give a clear topic sentence and add specific reasons or feelings about singing, using correct grammar and natural expressions.

例: Yes, I like singing because it is an art form that allows me to express my emotions and creativity. It helps me relax and connect with others through music.

提案: Your answer is too brief and does not provide any supporting details. To improve, give a complete sentence and add some information about your singing lessons or experience to make your answer more natural and informative.

例: Yes, I have taken singing lessons for a year to improve my vocal skills and learn proper techniques.

提案: Your answer is unclear and contains filler words like 'Or something'. Try to respond directly with a clear topic sentence and explain your idea with specific details, avoiding vague expressions.

例: I would like to sing for elderly people who may not have the chance to sing themselves, as I believe music can bring them joy and comfort.

提案: Your answer shows some reasoning but is a bit repetitive and grammatically incorrect ('a sad' should be 'sad music'). To improve, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly and provide clearer examples.

例: I believe singing can bring happiness to people depending on the type of music. For example, upbeat pop songs often make people feel joyful, while sad songs might evoke different emotions.

× Yes, I like singing 'cause it's a art of music.

✓ Yes, I like singing 'cause it's an art of music.

The word 'art' begins with a vowel sound, so the indefinite article 'a' should be replaced with 'an' to be grammatically correct.

× I would sing for people who couldn't sing for themselves back in the olden days.

✓ I would sing for people who couldn't sing by themselves back in the olden days.

The phrase 'sing for themselves' is incorrect because 'for' implies doing something on behalf of someone else. The correct preposition is 'by' to indicate doing something independently.

× If it's a pop music, yes.

✓ If it's pop music, yes.

The word 'music' is an uncountable noun and does not require the indefinite article 'a'. Also, 'pop' functions as an adjective here and does not need an article before 'music'.

× If, but if it's a sad, probably no.

✓ But if it's sad, probably not.

The phrase 'a sad' is incorrect because 'sad' is an adjective and cannot stand alone as a noun with an article. Also, 'probably no' should be 'probably not' to correctly negate the statement.