Singing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is clear and relevant, but it could be more natural and grammatically correct. Try to say "after an entire day" instead of "after entire day" and avoid repeating the word "singing". Also, you can add a linking phrase to make your answer smoother.

例: Yes, I really enjoy singing because it helps me relax and reduce stress after a long day at work.

提案: Your answer is direct and clear, which is good. To improve, you could add a little more detail or explanation to enrich your response and use a linking word to connect ideas.

例: No, I have never formally learned how to sing, but I enjoy singing casually in my free time.

提案: Your answer is a bit unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to structure your response with a clear topic sentence and supporting details. Use linking words to connect your ideas and avoid filler words like "uh."

例: I usually sing for myself rather than for others because it helps me relax after a busy day.

提案: Your answer is somewhat confusing and has grammatical mistakes. To improve, start with a clear topic sentence, use linking words, and provide specific examples. Avoid unclear phrases like "two other people also sitting."

例: I believe singing can bring happiness to people because, like me, it helps reduce stress and anxiety after a tiring day.

× Yes, I'm a huge fan of singing because singing can help me to reduce stress after entire day.

✓ Yes, I'm a huge fan of singing because singing can help me reduce stress after an entire day.

The verb 'help' is followed by the base form of the verb without 'to' in this context. Also, 'after entire day' is missing the article 'an' before 'entire day'.

× I have never learned how to sing.

✓ I have never learnt how to sing.

Both 'learned' and 'learnt' are correct past participles of 'learn'. However, 'learnt' is more commonly used in British English, which fits the context better. No correction needed if American English is intended.

× The reason I sing is not for someone else is is support my uh myself after an entire day. So I not really have anyone to sing for.

✓ The reason I sing is not for someone else; it is to support myself after an entire day. So, I don't really have anyone to sing for.

The original sentence has repetition ('is is'), missing auxiliary verbs ('do not' for negation), and unclear phrasing. Correcting sentence structure and adding missing verbs improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Just the example is myself, I think to reduce my stress after tired day so two other people also sitting can bring happiness and help other people to reduce stress and anxiety.

✓ For example, I think singing reduces my stress after a tiring day, and it can also bring happiness and help other people reduce stress and anxiety.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. Reordering the sentence, adding articles ('a tiring day'), and correcting verb forms improve clarity and grammatical accuracy.