Singing— Part 1 採点レポート
会話
Part 1
試験官
Do you like singing? Why?
受験者
Yes, I like singing a lot, mainly because it helps me calm myself. For example, I like singing during taking a shower or after having a bad day. It helps me soothe myself and prepare for the next task.
試験官
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
受験者
No, I've never learned how to sing, but I'm willing to give it a shot, especially when I have some free time. I would like to learn singing.
試験官
Who do you want to sing for?
受験者
I would like to sing for my parents. I think they would be quite appreciative of the fact that I learned new skill. It would be a chance to demonstrate that I do something else besides my regular studies as well.
試験官
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
受験者
Yes, I think singing definitely does bring happiness to people, uh, especially because people can express their emotions quite easily and since it's a universal language, people need not be specific to a particular lyrics, they can just connect to the music.
評価
総合
Part 1
Do you like singing? Why?
スコア: 85.0提案: Your answer is clear and relevant, but try to avoid minor grammatical errors and improve sentence flow. For example, instead of 'during taking a shower', say 'while taking a shower'. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.
例: Yes, I like singing a lot because it helps me calm down. For instance, I often sing while taking a shower or after a stressful day, which soothes me and prepares me for the next task.
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
スコア: 80.0提案: Your answer is direct and understandable, but try to use more natural expressions and avoid repetition. Instead of 'learn singing', say 'learn to sing'. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas.
例: No, I have never learned to sing formally, but I am willing to give it a try, especially when I have some free time, because I would like to improve my singing skills.
Who do you want to sing for?
スコア: 82.0提案: Your answer is relevant but can be improved by correcting grammar and using linking words. For example, say 'a new skill' instead of 'new skill'. Also, connect your ideas more smoothly.
例: I would like to sing for my parents because I believe they would appreciate that I have learned a new skill. Moreover, it would be an opportunity to show them that I do more than just focus on my studies.
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
スコア: 78.0提案: Your answer has good ideas but can be more concise and fluent. Avoid filler words like 'uh' and improve sentence structure. Also, use linking words to connect your points clearly.
例: Yes, I believe singing brings happiness because it allows people to express their emotions easily. Furthermore, since music is a universal language, listeners can connect with it even without understanding the exact lyrics.
文法
× I like singing during taking a shower or after having a bad day.
✓ I like singing while taking a shower or after having a bad day.
The phrase 'during taking a shower' is incorrect because 'during' should be followed by a noun or noun phrase, not a verb in -ing form. Using 'while' is appropriate here to indicate simultaneous actions.
× I think they would be quite appreciative of the fact that I learned new skill.
✓ I think they would be quite appreciative of the fact that I learned a new skill.
The word 'skill' is a countable noun and requires an article 'a' when singular. Omitting the article before 'new skill' is incorrect.
× people need not be specific to a particular lyrics, they can just connect to the music.
✓ people need not be specific to particular lyrics; they can just connect to the music.
The phrase 'specific to a particular lyrics' is incorrect because 'lyrics' is plural and should not be preceded by 'a particular'. Also, a semicolon is better than a comma to separate two independent clauses.
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