Singing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答中有语法错误和用词不当，例如将'singing'误说成'seeing'，影响了表达的清晰度。建议注意动词形式和句子结构，避免冗长和重复。可以尝试用简单明了的句子表达你的观点。

例: Yes, I like singing because it helps me express my feelings and relieve stress. Singing a song can always improve my mood and make me feel happier.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清的问题，如'to learn singing'应为'to sing'或'how to sing'，句子结构不完整。建议使用更准确的表达，并且增加连接词使句子更连贯。

例: Yes, I learned how to sing when I was in primary school. It was a good experience because I acquired useful singing skills, which have encouraged me to sing more confidently over the years.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和表达不自然的地方，如'she really like seeing listeners sing'应为'she really likes listening to me sing'。建议注意主谓一致和词汇搭配，同时丰富细节使回答更具体。

例: I would like to sing for my mother because she enjoys listening to me sing. For example, I used to sing a song for her on my birthday, and she was very proud of me.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和表达不流畅的问题，如'Definitely we saw doubt'不合适。建议使用更自然的表达，避免口语填充词，增强句子连贯性。

例: Definitely, singing can bring happiness to people because it helps reduce stress and makes you feel joyful. When you sing a song, the melody can cheer you up and improve your mood.

× I'm really into seeing because it can express my recently mood and alleviate pressure to sing a song can always change my mood to be more delightful and make me feel better.

✓ I'm really into singing because it can express my recent mood and alleviate pressure. Singing a song can always change my mood to be more delightful and make me feel better.

这里'seeing'应为'singing'，因为题目是关于唱歌的。'recently mood'应为'recent mood'，'recently'是副词，修饰形容词应使用'recent'。句子中缺少连接词，导致句子结构混乱，需拆分为两个句子。

× We used to learn singing at the primary school.

✓ We used to learn singing at primary school.

'the primary school'中的定冠词'the'不合适，通常说'primary school'表示小学。

× It's a quite good experience because I can learn the skills about singing.

✓ It's quite a good experience because I can learn skills about singing.

'quite good'中'quite'应放在冠词'a'之前，且'skills'前不需要定冠词'the'，因为这里泛指技能。

× It helps me for a long time and encourage me to sing a song to briefly.

✓ It has helped me for a long time and encouraged me to sing a song briefly.

时态应与过去经历一致，使用现在完成时'have helped'和过去时'encouraged'。'to briefly'位置错误，应为'adverb + verb'结构，改为'sing a song briefly'。

× she really like seeing listeners sing, especially if I sing to her because she will very proud of me.

✓ she really likes seeing listeners sing, especially if I sing to her because she will be very proud of me.

第三人称单数动词需加's'，'like'应为'likes'。'will very proud'缺少系动词，应为'will be very proud'。

× For example, I used to sing a song with my mother when I was birthday.

✓ For example, I used to sing a song with my mother on my birthday.

'when I was birthday'表达错误，正确表达为'on my birthday'。

× Definitely we saw doubt because singing can alleviate your stress and, uh, make you feel delightful and bring your happiness.

✓ Definitely, we have no doubt because singing can alleviate your stress, make you feel delighted, and bring you happiness.

'we saw doubt'表达错误，应为'we have no doubt'。'delightful'是形容词，描述人时应使用'delighted'。句子中缺少逗号分隔并列成分。

× When you just sing a song, a melody is help you to cheer up.

✓ When you just sing a song, the melody helps you to cheer up.

'a melody'应为特指的'the melody'，动词需用第三人称单数形式'helps'。