Singing— Part 1 採点レポート
会話
Part 1
試験官
Do you like singing? Why?
受験者
I love singing, it's always the best way for me to release stress and be happier after I got some difficulties in my life. So whenever I have pressure, I sing.
試験官
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
受験者
Well, I haven't learned how to sing even though I love singing and I have been singing, uh, when I was very young to my parents. Umm, but I think I would consider learning, uh, how to sing properly in the future because, uh, since we.
試験官
Who do you want to sing for?
受験者
I used to sing for my parents, my friends, and my schools as well, but since I got older, I prefer singing for myself because it is the best way for me to release stress and uh, to be happier.
試験官
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
受験者
Yes, definitely. As I mentioned before, I used to sing for my parents whenever they uh, felt like stress and umm, bad. And as I growing up, uh, as now after a long day, I often see for myself to be more relaxed.
評価
総合
Part 1
Do you like singing? Why?
スコア: 75.0提案: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tự nhiên và thể hiện cảm xúc cá nhân rõ ràng, tuy nhiên bạn nên tránh lặp từ và sử dụng cấu trúc câu đa dạng hơn để câu trả lời hiệu quả hơn. Hãy cố gắng sử dụng các từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp nhỏ.
例: Yes, I really enjoy singing because it helps me relieve stress and lift my mood whenever I face difficulties. Therefore, singing has become my favorite way to relax after a hard day.
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
スコア: 60.0提案: Bạn nên tránh sử dụng nhiều từ ngắt quãng như "uh", "umm" và hoàn thành câu trả lời một cách rõ ràng. Ngoài ra, câu trả lời nên có cấu trúc rõ ràng với câu chủ đề và chi tiết hỗ trợ, tránh để câu bị dang dở.
例: No, I haven't taken any formal singing lessons yet, although I have loved singing since I was a child. However, I am considering taking lessons in the future to improve my skills.
Who do you want to sing for?
スコア: 70.0提案: Câu trả lời của bạn có ý tưởng rõ ràng nhưng nên tránh sử dụng từ ngắt quãng như "uh" và mở rộng thêm chi tiết để câu trả lời phong phú hơn. Sử dụng từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc và tự nhiên hơn.
例: I used to sing for my parents, friends, and even at school events. However, now I prefer singing for myself because it helps me relax and boosts my happiness after a stressful day.
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
スコア: 65.0提案: Bạn nên tránh sử dụng nhiều từ ngắt quãng và sửa lỗi ngữ pháp như "as I growing up" và "I often see for myself". Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng, mạch lạc và có thêm chi tiết cụ thể để tăng tính thuyết phục.
例: Yes, definitely. Singing can bring happiness to people. For example, I used to sing to my parents when they were stressed, and now I sing to myself after a long day to feel more relaxed and joyful.
文法
× I love singing, it's always the best way for me to release stress and be happier after I got some difficulties in my life.
✓ I love singing, it's always the best way for me to release stress and be happier after I have had some difficulties in my life.
The sentence uses 'got' which is simple past tense, but the context requires present perfect tense 'have had' to indicate experiences that affect the present. Using present perfect is appropriate when referring to life experiences that have relevance now.
× Well, I haven't learned how to sing even though I love singing and I have been singing, uh, when I was very young to my parents.
✓ Well, I haven't learned how to sing even though I love singing and I have been singing, uh, since I was very young to my parents.
The phrase 'when I was very young' should be replaced with 'since I was very young' to correctly express the duration of an action continuing from the past to the present. 'Since' is used with present perfect continuous tense to indicate the starting point of an action.
× And as I growing up, uh, as now after a long day, I often see for myself to be more relaxed.
✓ And as I am growing up, uh, now after a long day, I often sing for myself to be more relaxed.
The phrase 'as I growing up' is missing the auxiliary verb 'am' for present continuous tense. Also, 'see for myself' is incorrect; the intended verb is likely 'sing for myself'. The correction fixes verb form and word choice to convey the intended meaning.
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