Singing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答表达了喜欢唱歌的原因，但有一些语法错误和用词不当（如'seeing'应为'singing'），建议注意单词拼写和语法的准确性。此外，回答可以更简洁自然，避免重复。

例: Yes, I really enjoy singing because it helps me relax. For example, I often sing songs to calm myself down after exams.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误，如'didn't have learned'应为'haven't learned'，以及'seeing'应为'singing'。建议使用正确的时态和单词拼写，并且回答时结构更清晰。

例: No, I haven't learned how to sing formally. I just sing in my own way because I believe singing is a way to express feelings and life.

提案: 回答中有重复和语法错误，表达不够清晰。建议简化句子，避免重复，并用更自然的表达方式说明观点。

例: I don't usually sing for a specific person. I sing for myself because it helps me relax and express my emotions.

提案: 回答表达了观点，但存在拼写错误（'seeing'应为'singing'）和语法问题。建议注意单词拼写，使用更连贯的句子结构。

例: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to everyone because many people listen to music when they feel upset or depressed. Singing is a good way to relax and feel better.

× The reason why I like seeing is that I think singing the song is very relaxing.

✓ The reason why I like singing is that I think singing songs is very relaxing.

The word 'seeing' is a misspelling or misuse; it should be 'singing' which is the correct gerund form here. Also, 'singing the song' is awkward; 'singing songs' is more natural and grammatically correct.

× For example once I sing songs to relax myself after exams.

✓ For example, I sing songs to relax myself after exams.

The phrase 'once I sing songs' is awkward and incorrect here. The sentence should use simple present tense 'I sing songs' to express habitual action. Also, a comma after 'For example' is needed for clarity.

× No, actually I didn't. I didn't have learned how to sing.

✓ No, actually I didn't. I haven't learned how to sing.

The phrase 'I didn't have learned' is incorrect. The correct present perfect form is 'I haven't learned' to indicate an action not done up to now.

× I just sing it in my own way.

✓ I just sing in my own way.

The pronoun 'it' is unnecessary and incorrect here because 'sing' is an intransitive verb in this context; no object pronoun is needed.

× I think that seeing is just a way to express your feelings and your life.

✓ I think that singing is just a way to express your feelings and your life.

The word 'seeing' is a misspelling or misuse; it should be 'singing' which is the correct gerund form here.

× I don't think I will think for a specific person.

✓ I don't think I will sing for a specific person.

The phrase 'I will think for a specific person' is incorrect and illogical. The intended meaning is 'I will sing for a specific person.' The verb 'think' is wrongly used here.

× I think I I will sing for my life.

✓ I think I will sing for my life.

There is a repeated word 'I I' which is a typographical error and should be corrected to a single 'I'.

× The reason is the reason is that I think singing is a very relaxing way and expressing way.

✓ The reason is that I think singing is a very relaxing and expressive way.

The phrase 'a very relaxing way and expressing way' is awkward and incorrect. 'Expressing' should be changed to the adjective 'expressive' to modify 'way' properly.

× Yes, sure. I think seeing can bring happiness to everyone.

✓ Yes, sure. I think singing can bring happiness to everyone.

The word 'seeing' is a misspelling or misuse; it should be 'singing' which is the correct gerund form here.

× So I think singing is very a good way for us to relax.

✓ So I think singing is a very good way for us to relax.

The adverb 'very' should be placed before the adjective 'good' without interruption. 'Very a good' is incorrect word order.