Singing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答中有语法错误和拼写错误，例如“sing”应为“singing”，“seeing”应为“singing”。建议使用完整的句子表达原因，并避免重复。

例: Yes, I like singing because it makes me feel happy and relaxed.

提案: 回答中缺少直接回答“是否学过唱歌”，句子结构不完整，建议先明确回答问题，再补充细节。

例: Yes, I have learnt how to sing. I usually practice singing for two hours every weekend because I enjoy it.

提案: 回答不符合问题要求，且语法错误较多。建议直接回答想为谁唱歌，并说明原因。

例: I would like to sing for my family because they always support me and encourage me.

提案: 回答中有拼写错误和语法错误，表达不清晰。建议用更准确的词汇和句子表达观点，并举例说明。

例: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness because it allows people to express their emotions and enjoy music together.

× I really like sing because I think seeing is very happy.

✓ I really like singing because I think singing is very happy.

动词like后面应接动名词形式，不能直接接动词原形。这里的sing应改为singing。

× I really like sing because I think seeing is very happy.

✓ I really like singing because I think singing makes me very happy.

happy是形容词，不能直接用来描述动作，应使用动词短语表达感受，如makes me very happy。

× Have you ever learnt how to sing?

✓ Have you ever learned how to sing?

learn的过去分词在美式英语中通常拼写为learned，learnt是英式拼写，视具体语境选择。

× I often sing and I sing every weekend 2 hours 'cause I like it.

✓ I often sing and I sing for 2 hours every weekend because I like it.

时间状语应放在合适位置，'2 hours'前应加介词'for'，'cause'应写为完整形式'because'。

× I went to Zhou Jielin sing for me because I'm very like he.

✓ I want Zhou Jielin to sing for me because I like him very much.

'went to'用错，表达愿望应用want；'I'm very like he'语法错误，应为'I like him very much'，宾格代词him替代he。

× Yes, I do, because I think Seeing is very happy and people can join Sing.

✓ Yes, I do, because I think singing is very enjoyable and people can join in singing.

Seeing应为singing，且happy用来形容人，描述活动应用enjoyable；'join Sing'应改为'join in singing'，动词后需加介词短语。