Singing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: In English (Cambodia), try to make your answer clearer and more organized. Start with a direct answer, then add specific reasons using linking words like 'because' or 'and'. Avoid repeating words and keep your sentences concise.

例: Yes, I like singing because it has been my favorite hobby since I was young. It helps me relax and boosts my confidence. I also enjoy music and dancing.

提案: In English (Cambodia), focus on using correct verb forms and clearer sentence structure. Give a direct answer first, then explain with specific details using linking words like 'because' or 'so'. Avoid incomplete sentences.

例: Yes, I have learned how to sing since I was young because my goal was to become a superstar. Learning to sing has helped me relax and improve my skills.

提案: In English (Cambodia), try to organize your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details. Use correct verb forms and linking words like 'because' to explain your reasons. Keep sentences concise and avoid repetition.

例: I want to sing for myself because music makes me happy and more confident. I enjoy my voice and singing helps me relax.

提案: In English (Cambodia), try to use clearer and more accurate expressions. Start with a direct answer, then explain with specific reasons using linking words like 'because' or 'and'. Avoid repeating words and incomplete sentences.

例: Yes, singing can bring happiness to people. I like singing because it helps me have fun, relieve stress from studying, and improve my voice while relaxing me.

× Why yes of course I like singing because it my favorite habit when I was young and it's really helped me relax and I can be more confident with music and I really really like music and singing instead. And dancing also.

✓ Why yes, of course I like singing because it was my favorite habit when I was young and it has really helped me relax and I can be more confident with music. I really, really like music and singing. And dancing also.

The pronoun 'it' was missing the verb 'was' to correctly refer to 'my favorite habit'. Also, 'it's' should be 'it has' to indicate present perfect tense. Adding commas improves clarity. 'Instead' was unnecessary and removed for better sentence flow.

× Yes, of course I have learned how to sings because since I was young, my goal is want to be a superstar.

✓ Yes, of course I have learned how to sing because since I was young, my goal has been to be a superstar.

The verb 'sings' is incorrect after 'have learned how to'; the base form 'sing' should be used. Also, 'my goal is want to be' is incorrect; it should be 'my goal has been to be' to express a continuous past intention.

× But yeah, so I learned how to sing sing I was young and however it's helped me a lot help me relax and help my.

✓ But yeah, I learned how to sing when I was young and it has helped me a lot, helping me relax.

The sentence had repetition ('sing sing'), missing words ('when'), and incomplete phrases ('help my'). Correcting these improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× For me, I only want to sing for myself because I think music makes me happy, made me more confident, I want to sings and I really like my voice and when I singing I really enjoy and relax, I really like it.

✓ For me, I only want to sing for myself because I think music makes me happy and has made me more confident. I want to sing and I really like my voice. When I sing, I really enjoy and relax. I really like it.

The sentence had tense inconsistency ('made' should be 'has made'), incorrect verb form ('sings' should be 'sing'), and incorrect verb form after 'when' ('singing' should be 'sing'). Splitting into shorter sentences improves clarity.

× Yes, of course singing can bring happiness for people like me.

✓ Yes, of course singing can bring happiness to people like me.

The preposition 'for' is incorrect here; 'to' is the correct preposition after 'bring happiness'.

× I really like singing because singing help me fun, help me more fun help me release my stress when I studying too much and it's helped me my help my voice to be good and really relax of course.

✓ I really like singing because singing helps me have fun, helps me enjoy more, and helps me release my stress when I study too much. It has also helped improve my voice and helps me relax, of course.

The verbs after 'singing' need third person singular form ('helps'). 'Help me fun' is incorrect; it should be 'helps me have fun'. 'When I studying' should be 'when I study'. The sentence was fragmented and unclear, so it was restructured for clarity.