Singing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答较为自然，但表达略显重复，且句子结构简单。建议减少重复表达，使用更丰富的词汇和句型，使回答更流畅且信息量更大。

例: Yes, I enjoy singing a lot, although I usually keep it private because I lack confidence to perform in front of others. Singing alone at home helps me relax and express my feelings freely.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误（'tend to singing'应为'tend to sing'），且内容重复。建议注意语法准确性，避免重复，并尝试提供更多细节。

例: No, I have never taken formal singing lessons, which is why I feel a bit insecure about my skills and prefer singing alone rather than in front of an audience.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误（'singing'应为'sing'，'seeing'应为'singing'），表达不够清晰。建议注意语法和用词准确，句子结构应更简洁明了。

例: I usually sing just for myself because I lack confidence in my singing. Singing helps me express my emotions and relax without any pressure.

提案: 回答中有词汇使用不当（'impress their emotional'应为'express their emotions'），句子结构不够自然。建议使用正确的词汇搭配，并使句子更流畅。

例: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people. It allows them to express their emotions and relax, which improves their mood. For instance, when I sing my favorite songs, I feel happier and more connected to others.

× So that's why I always tend to singing by myself, not in front of many people.

✓ So that's why I always tend to sing by myself, not in front of many people.

动词 tend 后面应接动词原形，而不是动名词形式。这里应使用 tend to sing 而非 tend to singing。

× I usually only singing for myself because I didn't feel really confident about my singing ability and I only enjoy impressing my emotions through the music, so seeing for myself helped me to relax and improve my skills without feeling pressured.

✓ I usually only sing for myself because I don't feel really confident about my singing ability and I only enjoy expressing my emotions through the music, so singing for myself helps me to relax and improve my skills without feeling pressured.

主语 I 后应使用动词原形 sing 而非动名词 singing；时态应与上下文一致，改为一般现在时 don't feel；动词 enjoy 后应接动名词 expressing；seeing 应为 singing，且时态应与上下文一致。

× I only enjoy impressing my emotions through the music

✓ I only enjoy expressing my emotions through the music

动词 enjoy 后应接动名词，且表达“表达情感”应使用 express 而非 impress，impress 意为“给人深刻印象”，用词不当。

× so seeing for myself helped me to relax and improve my skills without feeling pressured.

✓ so singing for myself helped me to relax and improve my skills without feeling pressured.

短语中应为 singing for myself，seeing for myself 语义不通，且 seeing 用法错误。

× Yes, I do think singing can be happiness to people.

✓ Yes, I do think singing can bring happiness to people.

happiness 是名词，不能直接用作形容词。应使用动词短语 bring happiness 来表达“带来快乐”。

× Singing allows people to impress their emotional and relax which can improve our mood.

✓ Singing allows people to express their emotions and relax, which can improve our mood.

动词 impress 用法错误，应为 express（表达）；emotional 是形容词，需用名词 emotions；并且句中缺少逗号分隔从句。

× For example, when I was singing my favorite songs, it also helps me to feel more cheerful and connect to other people.

✓ For example, when I sing my favorite songs, it also helps me to feel more cheerful and connect to other people.

句中时态应保持一致，描述习惯性动作应使用一般现在时，故将 was singing 改为 sing。