Singing— Part 1 採点レポート
会話
Part 1
試験官
Do you like singing? Why?
受験者
I like singing because I can praise the Lord and I can express myself with my voice and with my talents that I have, and I love to sing.
試験官
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
受験者
Yes, I took class singing classes in my church and in my school and it's a deep connection with God and I like to sing very much. And answering your question, I have learned to sing.
試験官
Who do you want to sing for?
受験者
I want to sing to God because he's my Creator, He's my dad, He's my force, He's my all, and He is worthy of all the glory and all my talents.
試験官
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
受験者
Yes, I think that maybe bring happiness to people, but I want to bring happiness to God.
評価
総合
Part 1
Do you like singing? Why?
スコア: 70.0提案: Try to make your answer more concise and natural by avoiding repetition and adding linking words. For example, start with a clear topic sentence and then explain your reasons with specific details.
例: Yes, I enjoy singing because it allows me to express my feelings and praise the Lord. Moreover, it helps me showcase my talents and brings me joy.
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
スコア: 65.0提案: Avoid repeating the question in your answer and try to organize your ideas logically using linking words. Also, be more specific about your learning experience.
例: Yes, I have learned to sing by taking classes at my church and school. These lessons helped me develop a deeper connection with God and improved my singing skills.
Who do you want to sing for?
スコア: 75.0提案: Your answer is heartfelt but could be more concise and structured. Use linking words to connect your ideas and avoid listing too many titles without explanation.
例: I want to sing for God because He is my Creator and source of strength. Singing for Him allows me to express my gratitude and honor His greatness.
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
スコア: 60.0提案: Try to give a clearer and more confident answer. Use linking words to explain your opinion and provide specific reasons or examples.
例: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people because music uplifts the spirit. However, my main goal is to bring joy to God through my singing.
文法
× Yes, I think that maybe bring happiness to people, but I want to bring happiness to God.
✓ Yes, I think that maybe singing brings happiness to people, but I want to bring happiness to God.
The original sentence lacks the correct verb form after 'maybe'. In English, after modal adverbs like 'maybe', the verb should be in the present tense with the appropriate subject-verb agreement. Here, 'bring' should be 'brings' to agree with the singular subject 'singing'. Also, adding 'singing' clarifies the subject of the verb, making the sentence grammatically correct and clearer.
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