Singing— Part 1 採点レポート
会話
Part 1
試験官
Do you like singing? Why?
受験者
Definitely yes. I am a big fan of singing and I tend to spend my free time singing to relax myself.
試験官
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
受験者
I think it's yes I really love singing and I usually research how to sing better. For example, when I watch video on YouTube or Tiktok, I usually watch karaoke video that provide me.
試験官
Who do you want to sing for?
受験者
I think it's quite hard to answer this question so I don't have a one person to sing for. I think every my friends or my family can hear my voice when singing.
試験官
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
受験者
Absolutely yes. Singing my For example, when I sing my favorite song I feel really happy and refreshed and I so it's the reason why I tend to sing when I have a spare time.
評価
総合
Part 1
Do you like singing? Why?
スコア: 75.0提案: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tự nhiên và trực tiếp, nhưng bạn nên tránh lặp từ và mở rộng thêm chi tiết cụ thể hơn để làm câu trả lời phong phú hơn. Ví dụ, bạn có thể nói thêm về thể loại nhạc yêu thích hoặc cảm giác khi hát.
例: Yes, I really enjoy singing because it helps me relax after a busy day. I especially like singing pop songs as they are upbeat and fun, which lifts my mood instantly.
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
スコア: 65.0提案: Bạn nên trả lời rõ ràng hơn và sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh. Ngoài ra, hãy sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và cung cấp chi tiết cụ thể về cách bạn học hát.
例: Yes, I have tried to learn singing by watching karaoke videos on YouTube and TikTok. These videos help me practice my pitch and improve my vocal skills gradually.
Who do you want to sing for?
スコア: 60.0提案: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp và sử dụng liên từ để làm rõ ý. Hãy nói cụ thể hơn về người bạn muốn hát cho hoặc hoàn cảnh.
例: I usually sing for my family and friends because I enjoy sharing my passion with them. Singing for them makes me feel connected and happy.
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
スコア: 55.0提案: Câu trả lời của bạn có lỗi ngữ pháp và thiếu sự mạch lạc. Bạn nên sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh, tránh lỗi và dùng liên từ để kết nối ý. Hãy cung cấp ví dụ cụ thể và cảm xúc rõ ràng.
例: Absolutely yes. For example, when I sing my favorite songs, I feel happy and refreshed. That's why I often sing during my free time to boost my mood.
文法
× I think it's yes I really love singing and I usually research how to sing better.
✓ I think yes, I really love singing and I usually research how to sing better.
The phrase 'it's yes' is incorrect in this context. The correct expression is simply 'yes' to affirm the statement. This is a present tense issue because the verb 'think' is in present tense and the affirmation should match the tense and formality.
× For example, when I watch video on YouTube or Tiktok, I usually watch karaoke video that provide me.
✓ For example, when I watch videos on YouTube or TikTok, I usually watch karaoke videos that provide me.
The noun 'video' should be plural 'videos' because it refers to multiple instances. Also, 'provide' should be 'provide' to agree with the plural subject 'videos'. This is a singular and plural issue.
× I think every my friends or my family can hear my voice when singing.
✓ I think all my friends or my family can hear my voice when singing.
The phrase 'every my friends' is incorrect; 'every' is used with singular nouns. The correct quantifier here is 'all' for plural nouns. This is a singular and plural issue.
× I so it's the reason why I tend to sing when I have a spare time.
✓ So it's the reason why I tend to sing when I have spare time.
The article 'a' before 'spare time' is unnecessary because 'spare time' is an uncountable noun. This is an article error.
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