Singing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答は自然で効果的ですが、もう少し具体的な理由や経験を加えるとより良くなります。例えば、どのような時に歌うのが好きかや、歌うことでどのように気分が変わるかを説明すると良いでしょう。

例: Yes, I love singing because it helps me relieve stress and refresh my mind after a long day. For instance, when I feel tired from work, singing my favorite songs instantly lifts my mood and makes me feel more energetic.

提案: 回答は明確で具体的ですが、もう少し詳細を加えて、学んだことの効果や感想を述べるとより良くなります。例えば、呼吸法を学んだことでどのように歌が上達したかを説明すると良いでしょう。

例: Yes, I have. When I was in junior high school, I took several singing lessons with a music teacher to learn how to control my breath. This training helped me improve my vocal range and sing more confidently.

提案: 回答は自然で具体的ですが、もう少し感情や理由を深掘りすると良いでしょう。例えば、自分のために歌うことの意味や、なぜバスルームで歌うのが好きかを詳しく説明すると良いです。

例: I want to sing for myself because it helps me relieve stress and express my emotions honestly. I usually sing in the bathroom because its good acoustics make my voice sound richer, which boosts my confidence.

提案: 回答は非常に良いですが、さらに具体的な例や理由を加えるとより説得力が増します。例えば、歌うことでどのように人と繋がるのかや、他の具体的な効果を説明すると良いでしょう。

例: Absolutely. Singing can bring happiness to people because it allows them to express their feelings and connect with others. For example, my mother loves singing and she always feels very happy when she sings because it lifts her mood and helps her bond with friends during karaoke sessions.

× Singing can bring happiness to people because it allows them to express their feelings and connects with others.

✓ Singing can bring happiness to people because it allows them to express their feelings and connect with others.

The subject 'them' is plural, so the verb following it should be in the base form 'connect' to agree with the plural subject. Using 'connects' is incorrect because it is third person singular form, which does not agree with the plural pronoun 'them'.