Singing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答が不自然で文法的な誤りが多いです。ストレスが減る理由を明確にし、文を簡潔にまとめる練習をしましょう。例えば、"Singing makes me happy because it helps me reduce stress after a long day."のように表現すると良いです。

例: Yes, I like singing because it makes me happy and helps me reduce stress after a long day.

提案: 回答が不完全で意味が伝わりにくいです。なぜ歌を習いたいのか具体的に説明し、文を完結にしましょう。例えば、"No, I have never learned how to sing, but I want to learn to improve my voice."のように表現すると良いです。

例: No, I have never learned how to sing, but I want to learn to improve my voice.

提案: 文法ミスと冗長な表現があります。誰のために歌いたいのかを明確にし、理由を簡潔に述べましょう。例えば、"I want to sing for my girlfriend because we often go to karaoke together and enjoy the same artists."のように表現すると良いです。

例: I want to sing for my girlfriend because we often go to karaoke together and enjoy the same artists.

提案: 意味が不明瞭で繰り返しがあります。歌が人々に幸せをもたらす理由を具体的に述べ、簡潔に答えましょう。例えば、"Yes, I think singing brings happiness because it helps people express their feelings and relax."のように表現すると良いです。

例: Yes, I think singing brings happiness because it helps people express their feelings and relax.

× Yes, I like singing because singing makes me happy and.

✓ Yes, I like singing because singing makes me happy.

The sentence ends with an unnecessary conjunction 'and' which creates an incomplete sentence. Removing 'and' completes the sentence properly.

× Where I thinking my stress de make decreased.

✓ I think my stress decreases when I sing.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and unclear. Correcting the sentence structure and verb forms clarifies the meaning and makes it grammatically correct.

× No, I've never learned how to sing.

✓ No, I've never learnt how to sing.

Both 'learned' and 'learnt' are acceptable past participles of 'learn'. However, 'learnt' is more common in British English, which is often used in speaking tests. This correction aligns with that preference.

× However, I wanted to learn how to sing because I hope my thing is.

✓ However, I want to learn how to sing because I hope to improve.

The original sentence mixes past and present tense incorrectly and contains unclear phrases. Changing 'wanted' to 'want' matches the present desire, and rephrasing clarifies the meaning.

× I want to sing for my girlfriend because we we usually go to karaoke where we can sing.

✓ I want to sing for my girlfriend because we usually go to karaoke where we can sing.

The repetition of 'we' is a typographical error. Removing the duplicate corrects the sentence.

× And we are prefer to same artist.

✓ And we prefer the same artist.

The phrase 'are prefer to' is incorrect. The correct verb form is 'prefer' without 'are', and 'the same artist' requires the definite article 'the'.

× Yes, I think, I think you can bring happiness to people because I I always received happiness by singing.

✓ Yes, I think singing can bring happiness to people because I always receive happiness from singing.

The sentence has repeated phrases and incorrect verb tense. Removing duplicates and correcting verb tense improves clarity and grammar.

× And thinking is not necessary.

✓ And I think it is not necessary.

The original sentence lacks a subject and is unclear. Adding 'I' and 'it is' completes the sentence and clarifies the meaning.