Singing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答表达了喜欢唱歌的原因，但语言不够流畅，句子结构混乱，且有重复和语法错误。建议练习使用连贯的句子，避免重复，并注意语法正确性。

例: Yes, I really like singing because it helps me relax and reduce stress. When I sing my favorite songs, I feel happier and more comfortable. Singing also helps me forget my worries.

提案: 回答不完整且语句断断续续，缺乏连贯性和清晰表达。建议练习完整回答问题，使用连贯的句子，并且明确表达自己的意思。

例: No, I have never taken singing lessons in class. However, I often listen to music and try to sing along at home.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清的问题，句子不完整，影响理解。建议练习用完整句子表达原因，并使用连接词使表达更流畅。

例: I want to sing for my sister, parents, and friends because they always support me. Singing for them is a way to show my gratitude and make me feel happy.

提案: 回答不够清晰，句子结构混乱，词汇使用不当。建议练习用简单明了的句子表达观点，并使用恰当的词汇。

例: Definitely yes. Singing with a happy and fluent voice can make people feel joyful and improve their mood.

× Yes, I really like singing because singing makes me relax and, Raise my stress when I sing my favorite songs, I really feel, Happier and more comfortable.

✓ Yes, I really like singing because singing makes me relax and reduces my stress when I sing my favorite songs. I really feel happier and more comfortable.

动词短语中，'Raise' 应该用动词的-ing形式或第三人称单数形式，这里应使用第三人称单数形式'reduces'，因为主语是'singing'，表示动作使压力减少。

× No, I never learn how to sing.

✓ No, I have never learned how to sing.

表示过去到现在的经历时，应该用现在完成时，'never learn'应改为'have never learned'。

× In class. But. I. Always listen to the music on. In this time I will sing with.

✓ In class, I always listen to music. At this time, I will sing along.

句子中介词使用不当，'on'用法错误，应去掉；'in this time'应改为'at this time'，使表达更自然。

× I want to sing for my sister, my parents and my friends, because they always support for me.

✓ I want to sing for my sister, my parents and my friends, because they always support me.

动词'support'后不需要介词'for'，应直接加宾语。

× Sing to them is a way. And for? I spread. Seeing my gratitude and make me, feel.

✓ Singing to them is a way for me to express my gratitude and makes me feel good.

原句结构混乱，缺少连贯性和完整的句子结构，需调整为完整句子表达清楚意思。

× Definitely, yes. Because. With a fluent regime and happy, voice, you will feel happy and have a higher. Emotion.

✓ Definitely, yes. Because with a fluent rhythm and a happy voice, you will feel happy and have higher emotions.

'regime'用词错误，应为'rhythm'；'happy, voice'中逗号错误，应为'happy voice'；'a higher emotion'应为'higher emotions'，形容词和名词搭配需正确。