Singing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答中有语法错误，应该使用不定式作目的状语，如“to relax”。此外，回答较短，缺少具体细节。建议改进语法并丰富内容，例如说明唱歌如何帮助你放松。

例: Yes, I like singing because it helps me to relax after a busy day. Singing allows me to express my emotions and feel happier.

提案: 回答中存在严重语法和词汇错误，且表达不清晰。应直接回答问题，并用正确的时态和词汇。建议学习基本的时态用法和相关词汇，避免拼写错误。

例: No, I have never taken singing lessons, but I enjoy singing songs by myself.

提案: 回答完全不符合题意，语法和词汇错误严重，且内容混乱。建议理解问题含义，直接回答想为谁唱歌，并使用简单清晰的句子。

例: I want to sing for my parents because they always support me and make me happy.

× I like singing because it's a way to relaxed.

✓ I like singing because it's a way to relax.

动词不定式to后面应接动词原形，不能用过去分词relaxed。这里应使用动词原形relax。

× No, I don't learn how to say but.

✓ No, I haven't learned how to sing yet.

此句表达过去经历，应该用现在完成时haven't learned，且learn的过去分词是learned。原句中don't learn时态和用词错误。

× No, I don't learn how to say but. I like seeing.

✓ No, I haven't learned how to sing, but I like singing.

动词learn后接不定式to sing，且like后接动名词singing。原句中say和seeing用词错误。

× I want to see for flowers, animals and the nature of my parents to sex them.

✓ I want to sing for flowers, animals, and the nature, and for my parents to hear them.

原句中see用错，应为sing；sex用词错误，应为hear；句子结构混乱，需调整代词和表达。

× Of course, seeing is a way to relax and it can make people happy.

✓ Of course, singing is a way to relax and it can make people happy.

动名词应为singing，seeing是看，与语境不符。