Singing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答时语言不够自然，有语法错误和用词不当，如“'cause”应避免口语缩写，且“exciting songs can cheer me up when I feel very dumb”表达不准确。建议使用更地道的表达方式，避免重复和不恰当的词汇。

例: Yes, I enjoy singing because it helps me relieve stress. Upbeat songs especially lift my mood when I feel down.

提案: 回答缺乏具体细节，表达不清晰且有语法错误，如“learned about thing”不正确。建议明确说明学习内容，使用连贯的句子，并避免模糊词汇。

例: Yes, I learned singing basics in elementary school during music classes. Our teachers taught us how to use different vocal techniques, which was very helpful.

提案: 回答较为直接，但表达稍显重复。建议使用更自然的表达方式，并增加一些具体原因或感受，使回答更丰富。

例: I like to sing for my parents because it’s a special way to express my love and appreciation for them.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰，如“release your switch”不合适。建议使用准确的表达，逻辑更清晰，避免重复。

例: Yes, definitely. Singing helps people relieve stress and music has a healing effect that can encourage and inspire us.

× I like to sing 'cause I think singing can make me release my stress and exciting songs can cheer me up when I feel very dumb.

✓ I like to sing 'cause I think singing can help me relieve my stress and exciting songs can cheer me up when I feel very down.

这里'singing can make me release my stress'中的'release'用法不当，应该用'relieve'表示缓解压力。动词'relieve'后不接动词原形，而是直接用名词'stress'。此外，'feel very dumb'表达不准确，应该用'feel very down'表示情绪低落。

× Yes, I've learned about thing in elementary school.

✓ Yes, I've learned about things in elementary school.

'thing'应为复数形式'things'，表示多项内容。这里涉及复数问题，属于复数和单数问题。

× Yes, I've learned about thing in elementary school.

✓ Yes, I've learned about things in elementary school.

'thing'应为复数形式'things'，表示多项内容。

× We have music class and our teachers told me how to sing with different voices and I learned a lot about things.

✓ We have music class and our teachers told me how to sing with different voices and I learned a lot about things.

此句无复数错误，保持原句。

× Who do you want to sing for?

✓ Who do you want to sing to?

动词'sing'后面搭配介词'to'表示向某人唱歌，'for'用法不当。

× Perhaps I like to sing to my parents because I think singing to my parents can show my love to them.

✓ Perhaps I like to sing to my parents because I think singing to them can show my love.

重复使用'my parents'显得冗余，使用代词'them'更自然。

× Yes, absolutely, cause singing is a way people can release your switch as I mentioned.

✓ Yes, absolutely, cause singing is a way people can release their stress as I mentioned.

'your switch'用词错误，应为'their stress'，代词与主语不一致且词汇错误。

× And in the other way, music has healing power, they can encourage people and they can teach a lot of things.

✓ And in another way, music has healing power; it can encourage people and teach a lot of things.

主语'music'是单数，后面用'they'不正确，应使用单数代词'it'。