Singing— Part 1 採点レポート
会話
Part 1
試験官
Do you like singing? Why?
受験者
Well, yes, I like to sing a song. I think music is harmony and through the music you can feel the nature, you can feel yourself. Singing is like knowing yourself, like meeting to your soul. So yes, I like to sing.
試験官
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
受験者
Well, when I was a kid, during my childhood in school days I used to took music classes and at those moment I used to play the piano, also the guitar. So at that moment I learned how to sing. Right now I didn't attend and then don't attending anything.
試験官
Who do you want to sing for?
受験者
I like to sing for myself only because I'm I'm not sure I'm that much good in singing, but I feel good and I feel relaxed when I sing for myself when I sing my favorite song. So yes, I like to sing for myself only.
試験官
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
受験者
Well, yes, I guess singing is good for relaxing, refreshing and it brings happiness to the people. For example, if you meet with your friends and you have a group and we are doing group singing or some musical games then it will create.
評価
総合
Part 1
Do you like singing? Why?
スコア: 70.0提案: Your answer is thoughtful but a bit repetitive and slightly unclear in some phrases. Try to be more direct and concise, avoiding redundancy. Use simpler, clearer expressions to explain why you like singing, and keep your answer within 4-5 sentences.
例: Yes, I enjoy singing because it helps me express my emotions and relax. Music feels like a connection to nature and my inner self. Singing allows me to understand myself better and feel peaceful. That's why I like to sing.
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
スコア: 60.0提案: Your answer has grammatical errors and is somewhat confusing. Use correct verb tenses and clearer sentence structures. Also, try to directly answer the question first, then add supporting details with linking words for coherence.
例: Yes, I learned how to sing when I was a child. During my school days, I took music classes where I also played the piano and guitar. However, I am not currently taking any singing lessons.
Who do you want to sing for?
スコア: 65.0提案: Your answer is clear but a bit repetitive. Try to avoid repeating the same ideas and use linking words to make your answer more fluent. Also, correct minor grammar mistakes for better clarity.
例: I prefer to sing for myself because I am not confident about my singing skills. However, singing my favourite songs helps me feel relaxed and happy.
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
スコア: 60.0提案: Your answer is incomplete and lacks clarity. Try to complete your thoughts and use linking words to connect ideas logically. Provide specific examples to support your opinion and avoid unfinished sentences.
例: Yes, I believe singing brings happiness because it helps people relax and refresh their minds. For example, when friends gather and sing together or play musical games, it creates a joyful and lively atmosphere.
文法
× I used to took music classes and at those moment I used to play the piano, also the guitar.
✓ I used to take music classes and at those moments I used to play the piano, also the guitar.
The phrase 'used to' should be followed by the base form of the verb, not the past tense. Therefore, 'took' should be corrected to 'take'. Also, 'moment' should be plural 'moments' to match the context.
× Right now I didn't attend and then don't attending anything.
✓ Right now I don't attend and am not attending anything.
The sentence mixes past tense 'didn't attend' with present time reference 'Right now'. It should be in present tense to match the time frame. Also, 'don't attending' is incorrect; it should be 'am not attending' for the present continuous tense.
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