Singing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự tự nhiên và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi với một câu chủ đề rõ ràng, sau đó cung cấp thêm chi tiết cụ thể và sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

例: Yes, I really enjoy singing with my friends and family in my spare time because it reminds me of the happy moments I shared with my grandparents when I was a child.

提案: Câu trả lời không rõ ràng và có lỗi ngữ pháp nghiêm trọng. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng thì đúng và cấu trúc câu đơn giản nhưng chính xác, đồng thời cung cấp thêm chi tiết cụ thể.

例: Yes, I have learned how to sing from an international teacher, which helped me improve my vocal skills significantly.

提案: Câu trả lời có ý tưởng nhưng bị lặp từ và lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, tránh lặp từ, sử dụng cấu trúc câu đúng và thêm chi tiết để làm rõ ý.

例: I would love to sing with my mother because she has a beautiful voice and a great sense of pitch.

提案: Câu trả lời không rõ ràng và khó hiểu. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu đơn giản, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và cung cấp lý do hoặc ví dụ cụ thể để làm rõ quan điểm.

例: Of course, singing can bring happiness to people because it helps them express their emotions and feel more relaxed.

× Yes, I'm really like singing with my friends and my family in my spare time because in childhood, because when I was child, my grandparents and I used.

✓ Yes, I really like singing with my friends and my family in my spare time because in childhood, when I was a child, my grandparents and I used to sing.

The phrase 'I'm really like' is incorrect because 'like' is a stative verb and should not be used with the continuous form 'am'. Also, 'when I was child' is missing the article 'a'. The verb 'used' at the end is incomplete and should be 'used to sing' to indicate a past habitual action.

× I ever I ever learn sing, I ever learn shine from an international teacher.

✓ I have learned to sing; I have learned singing from an international teacher.

The phrase 'I ever I ever learn sing' is ungrammatical. The correct form is 'I have learned to sing' using the present perfect tense to indicate experience. Also, 'learn shine' is likely a typo for 'learn singing' or 'learn to sing'. The verb 'learn' should be followed by 'to' plus base verb or gerund form.

× Yes, I very want to sing sing with my mother because she's is very good and she has a good tone.

✓ Yes, I really want to sing with my mother because she is very good and she has a good tone.

The phrase 'I very want' is incorrect; 'very' cannot modify verbs directly. Instead, use 'really' to modify the verb 'want'. Also, 'she's is' is redundant; it should be 'she is'. The repeated word 'sing sing' should be corrected to a single 'sing'.

× Of course she can bring happiness to people, very people such a a man who knows money is he can sing he can.

✓ Of course singing can bring happiness to people, even to a man who knows money; if he can sing, he can.

The pronoun 'she' is incorrectly used to refer to 'singing', which is a gerund and should be treated as a neutral noun. The sentence is also fragmented and unclear; it needs restructuring for clarity. The phrase 'very people such a a man who knows money is he can sing he can' is ungrammatical and confusing; it is corrected to express the intended meaning clearly.