Singing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答不够连贯，语法错误较多，表达不清晰。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，明确表达喜欢唱歌的原因。

例: Yes, I like singing because it helps me relax and feel happy when I am stressed.

提案: 回答含糊且语法错误较多，缺乏清晰的结构和连贯性。建议直接回答问题，并用简单句说明学习唱歌的原因。

例: Yes, I have learned to sing because singing my favorite songs makes me feel cheerful and refreshed.

提案: 表达不清楚，语法和词汇错误严重，句子结构混乱。建议简洁明了地表达想为母亲唱歌的原因。

例: I want to sing for my mother because she has always helped and supported me.

提案: 回答较为完整，但存在发音和用词错误（如'seeing'应为'singing'），句子结构可更自然。建议注意发音，使用正确词汇，并简洁表达观点。

例: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness because it helps people relax and feel positive. For example, I feel happier and more energetic when I sing my favorite songs.

× I I like them because I think scenes can let me can feel the relaxing and interesting when I have some stress.

✓ I like them because I think singing can make me feel relaxed and interested when I have some stress.

这里'scenes'用错了，应该是'singing'，表示唱歌。'can let me can feel'结构重复且错误，正确用法是'can make me feel'。'the relaxing and interesting'应改为形容词'relaxed and interested'，表示感受。

× We can we can see in the streets is run out of my bodies.

✓ We can see people running in the streets.

句子结构混乱，'run out of my bodies'没有意义，应改为'people running'表示街上有人跑步。

× Umm, yes, uh, I learned to how to things, umm, because uh, when I listen, when listening my favorite songs, uh, I can, I feel more cheerful and refresh.

✓ Umm, yes, I learned how to sing because when I listen to my favorite songs, I feel more cheerful and refreshed.

'learned to how to things'结构错误，应为'learned how to sing'。'when listen, when listening'重复且用法不当，应为'when I listen to'。'refresh'应为过去分词'refreshed'，表示感受。

× My I I want to sing for my mother because I think because my mother gave me some helps and his afford afford me in on my on my behalf.

✓ I want to sing for my mother because she has helped me and supported me on my behalf.

'gave me some helps'错误，'help'不可数，应为'has helped me'。'his afford afford me in on my on my behalf'语法混乱，应改为'supported me on my behalf'。

× Hmm yes I I believe seeing can bring happiness to people because it helps them relax and reduce stress.

✓ Hmm yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people because it helps them relax and reduce stress.

'seeing'应为'singing'，表示唱歌。

× When people seeing, they can experience their emotions and feel more positive.

✓ When people sing, they can experience their emotions and feel more positive.

'When people seeing'语法错误，应为'When people sing'，动词原形表示习惯动作。

× For example, I often feel happiness and less energy when I sing my favorite song.

✓ For example, I often feel happy and more energetic when I sing my favorite song.

'feel happiness'应为'feel happy'，形容词形式。'less energy'应为'more energetic'，表示更有活力。