Singing— Part 1 採点レポート
会話
Part 1
試験官
Do you like singing? Why?
受験者
Yes, I love singing, mostly with my friends, primarily because it makes me feel relaxed, it enhances my creativity, it makes me feel refreshing. So I love singing.
試験官
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
受験者
Not exactly, I haven't taken any professional classes regarding how to sing, but my one professional singing friend has teach me some basics regarding the vocal chords.
試験官
Who do you want to sing for?
受験者
I would love to sing for my parents because they had this dream that I would become a singer one day. So not exactly the professional singer that I am currently, but with my enough talent and sufficient talent, I guess I would sing for them.
試験官
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
受験者
Yes, singing can bring a lot of happiness and joy to the people because singing is a form of art which can make everyone happy and even express their emotions in the form of sadness. Happiness which can bring tears to most of the people and it can relax your mind as well as it can be a source of inspiration to someone.
評価
総合
Part 1
Do you like singing? Why?
スコア: 75.0提案: Your answer is good but a bit repetitive and could be more concise. Try to avoid repeating similar ideas and use linking words to connect your points smoothly. Also, use more varied vocabulary to express your feelings about singing.
例: Yes, I enjoy singing, especially with my friends, because it helps me relax and boosts my creativity. Moreover, it refreshes my mind, which is why I love it so much.
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
スコア: 70.0提案: Your answer is understandable but contains some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Pay attention to verb tenses and plural forms. Also, try to use linking words to make your answer more coherent.
例: I haven't taken any professional singing classes, but a friend who is a professional singer has taught me some basics about vocal cords.
Who do you want to sing for?
スコア: 65.0提案: Your answer is a bit unclear and repetitive. Try to express your ideas more clearly and avoid repeating the same words. Also, use linking words to connect your sentences logically.
例: I would love to sing for my parents because they have always dreamed that I would become a singer. Although I am not a professional yet, I believe I have enough talent to perform for them.
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
スコア: 70.0提案: Your answer has good ideas but is somewhat repetitive and lacks clear structure. Use linking words to organize your points and avoid repeating similar phrases. Also, try to be more specific in your examples.
例: Yes, singing can bring happiness because it is an art form that allows people to express various emotions, including sadness. It can move listeners to tears, relax the mind, and even inspire others.
文法
× Not exactly, I haven't taken any professional classes regarding how to sing, but my one professional singing friend has teach me some basics regarding the vocal chords.
✓ Not exactly, I haven't taken any professional classes regarding how to sing, but my one professional singing friend has taught me some basics regarding the vocal cords.
The verb 'teach' should be in the past participle form 'taught' after 'has' to form the present perfect tense correctly. Also, 'vocal chords' should be 'vocal cords' as the correct anatomical term.
× So not exactly the professional singer that I am currently, but with my enough talent and sufficient talent, I guess I would sing for them.
✓ So not exactly the professional singer that I am currently, but with enough talent and sufficient skill, I guess I would sing for them.
The phrase 'my enough talent' is incorrect; 'enough' should directly modify the noun without 'my'. Also, repeating 'talent' is redundant; replacing the second with 'skill' improves clarity.
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