Singing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在语法错误，表达不够自然，且内容较为简单。建议使用更自然的表达方式，并且避免重复和语法错误。

例: Yes, I enjoy singing because it makes me feel happy and relaxed.

提案: 回答不完整且语法错误严重，表达不清晰。建议简洁明了地回答问题，并补充适当细节。

例: No, I have never taken formal singing lessons, but I try to improve by practicing on my own.

提案: 回答重复且语法错误较多，表达不够连贯。建议使用连词使句子更流畅，并避免重复。

例: I like to sing for myself because it helps me relax and improves my mood.

提案: 回答中存在重复，表达不够自然。建议使用更丰富的词汇和句式，使回答更具体。

例: Yes, singing can bring happiness to people because it helps them relax and lifts their spirits.

× Yes, I like singing because the singing will make me happy and feeling good.

✓ Yes, I like singing because singing will make me happy and feel good.

这里“feeling good”应改为“feel good”，因为前面用的是一般现在时态，动词应保持原形。动词后接动词时，通常用动词原形而非动名词。

× No, I think by myself and I learned to the.

✓ No, I taught myself and I learned to sing.

原句中“think by myself”用法错误，应为“taught myself”（自学）表示过去完成的动作；“learned to the”不完整，应补充“learned to sing”。

× I want to sing for myself because there is very relax and improve my mood so I can sing by myself and I want to sing by myself, sing for myself.

✓ I want to sing for myself because it is very relaxing and improves my mood, so I can sing by myself and I want to sing by myself, sing for myself.

“there is very relax”中“relax”应为形容词“relaxing”，且主语应为“it”；“improve”应改为第三人称单数“improves”，因为主语是单数。

× Yes, it can bring their happiness and relax their mood and improve their mood.

✓ Yes, it can bring happiness and relax and improve people's mood.

“their happiness”和“their mood”指代不明，应改为更通用的表达“people's mood”，避免代词指代不清。