Singing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答较简短，表达的情感词汇较为简单且重复，建议丰富词汇量，使用更自然的表达方式，并且避免重复。

例: Yes, I really enjoy singing because it lifts my spirits and helps me express my emotions.

提案: 回答内容较完整，但句子结构稍显复杂且有语法错误，建议简化句子结构，注意时态和主谓一致，使表达更自然流畅。

例: Unfortunately, I have never learned how to sing. When I was a child, I wanted to take singing lessons, but my schoolwork was too heavy, so I didn't have enough free time.

提案: 回答中有重复和语法错误，建议避免重复表达，注意句子连贯性和准确性，同时可以增加一些细节使回答更丰富。

例: I want to sing for my mother on her birthday next month. I'm preparing a beautiful song called 'I Love You China' that she really likes, and I hope she will enjoy my performance.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，建议简化句子结构，使用更准确的词汇，并且使表达更连贯自然。

例: Yes, definitely. Singing can evoke happy memories and special moments, which makes people feel joyful and relaxed.

× but at that time the school workload is really heavy, so I don't have enough spare time to do that.

✓ but at that time the school workload was really heavy, so I didn't have enough spare time to do that.

这里描述的是过去的情况，应该使用过去时态。'is'和'don't'应改为过去时态'was'和'didn't'。

× I'm preparing a song that she really she really like called I Love You China.

✓ I'm preparing a song that she really likes called I Love You China.

主语是第三人称单数'she'，谓语动词应加-s，'like'应改为'likes'。

× I think when people are singing, they are the the songs, the melodies will bring them to a certain memory, like in their happy time or their special occasions, which will remind me of that kind of feeling of happiness and pleasant.

✓ I think when people are singing, the songs, the melodies will bring them to a certain memory, like their happy times or their special occasions, which will remind them of that kind of feeling of happiness and pleasantness.

句子中'are the the songs'结构不正确，应去掉多余的'the'。此外，'which will remind me'中的'me'应改为'them'，与前文的'people'保持一致。'pleasant'应改为名词形式'pleasantness'以匹配语境。