Singing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答中存在语法错误，如“like sing”应为“like singing”，并且表达不够自然。建议使用更地道的表达方式，并且避免重复和冗余。

例: Yes, I enjoy singing because it helps me relax and express my emotions, especially when I sing love songs.

提案: 回答中语法错误较多，如缺少动词时态变化，且表达不够连贯。建议使用完整句子并使用连接词使表达更流畅。

例: Actually, I haven't learned how to sing professionally yet, but I am looking forward to developing my singing skills and studying more about it.

提案: 回答结构混乱，语法错误多，表达不清晰。建议先明确主题句，然后用具体细节支持，并使用连接词。

例: I want to sing for my parents because they used to sing lullabies to me when I was a child. My father especially enjoys listening to me sing, so I want to show him my own singing abilities.

提案: 回答内容不连贯，语法和词汇使用错误较多，表达不清晰。建议简洁明了地表达观点，并用具体例子支持。

例: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness because people often listen to cheerful songs to relax and improve their mood after a busy day.

× Yes, I like sing because I think singing let me relax and I love to sing my love song.

✓ Yes, I like singing because I think singing lets me relax and I love to sing my love song.

动词like后面应该接动名词形式singing，而不是动词原形sing。动词let在第三人称单数时应加s，变为lets。

× Yes, I like sing because I think singing let me relax and I love to sing my love song.

✓ Yes, I like singing because I think singing lets me relax and I love to sing my love song.

主语singing是第三人称单数，谓语动词let应加s，变为lets。

× Actually, no, but I looking forward, I'm looking forward to the the skills to sing and I want to study more about that.

✓ Actually, no, but I'm looking forward, I'm looking forward to the skills to sing and I want to study more about that.

动词look后面需要加be动词构成进行时态，正确形式是I'm looking forward。

× Actually, no, but I looking forward, I'm looking forward to the the skills to sing and I want to study more about that.

✓ Actually, no, but I'm looking forward, I'm looking forward to the skills to sing and I want to study more about that.

the重复出现，应去掉一个。

× Actually, no, but I looking forward, I'm looking forward to the the skills to sing and I want to study more about that.

✓ Actually, no, but I'm looking forward, I'm looking forward to the skills to sing and I want to study more about that.

skills是复数形式，前面用the skills是正确的。

× I want to sing for my parents because in my childhood they also sing the song for me like the the song for the baby and my father really like saying I want to sing for him to show my own singing.

✓ I want to sing for my parents because in my childhood they also sang songs for me like songs for babies and my father really likes singing. I want to sing for him to show my own singing.

动词时态应为过去时sang，songs应为复数形式，father是第三人称单数，谓语动词like应加s变为likes，动词形式应为动名词singing。

× I want to sing for my parents because in my childhood they also sing the song for me like the the song for the baby and my father really like saying I want to sing for him to show my own singing.

✓ I want to sing for my parents because in my childhood they also sang songs for me like songs for babies and my father really likes singing. I want to sing for him to show my own singing.

描述过去的动作应使用过去时态sang。

× I want to sing for my parents because in my childhood they also sing the song for me like the the song for the baby and my father really like saying I want to sing for him to show my own singing.

✓ I want to sing for my parents because in my childhood they also sang songs for me like songs for babies and my father really likes singing. I want to sing for him to show my own singing.

主语my father是第三人称单数，谓语动词like应加s，变为likes。

× I want to sing for my parents because in my childhood they also sing the song for me like the the song for the baby and my father really like saying I want to sing for him to show my own singing.

✓ I want to sing for my parents because in my childhood they also sang songs for me like songs for babies and my father really likes singing. I want to sing for him to show my own singing.

the重复出现，应去掉一个。

× Yes, of course the thing can be happiness people, because when people finish a baby day, they want to learn, they want to listen in some thoughts, to relax themselves and the happy song will make them happy.

✓ Yes, of course singing can bring happiness to people, because when people finish a baby's day, they want to learn, they want to listen to some thoughts, to relax themselves and happy songs will make them happy.

句子结构混乱，the thing can be happiness people不通顺，应改为singing can bring happiness to people。finish a baby day应为finish a baby's day。listen后应接介词to。happy song应为复数happy songs。

× Yes, of course the thing can be happiness people, because when people finish a baby day, they want to learn, they want to listen in some thoughts, to relax themselves and the happy song will make them happy.

✓ Yes, of course singing can bring happiness to people, because when people finish a baby's day, they want to learn, they want to listen to some thoughts, to relax themselves and happy songs will make them happy.

动词listen后应接介词to，而不是in。