Singing— Part 1 採点レポート
会話
Part 1
試験官
Do you like singing? Why?
受験者
Yes, I enjoy singing. This is because when I singing, I can release my stress. Moreover, I can express my feelings.
試験官
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
受験者
No, I haven't learned how to sing. However, if I had the chance to learn technical skills, I will Willing to learn. I am willing to learn those skills.
試験官
Who do you want to sing for?
受験者
I never thought about that before but I want to sing for my myself. This is because every time I sing I feel happiness and freedom. So singing is really changed my mood and.
試験官
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
受験者
Well, it varies. This is because some people don't enjoy singing because they feel awkward and unpleasant while they're singing. However, many people still can feel happiness and positive emotions by singing.
評価
総合
Part 1
Do you like singing? Why?
スコア: 70.0提案: 문법 오류를 수정하고, 문장을 더 자연스럽고 간결하게 표현하세요. 예를 들어, 'when I singing' 대신 'when I sing'를 사용하고, 중복되는 표현을 줄이세요.
例: Yes, I enjoy singing because it helps me relieve stress and express my emotions.
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
スコア: 65.0提案: 문법과 어휘 사용에 주의하세요. 'will Willing to learn'은 잘못된 표현입니다. 또한, 문장을 더 자연스럽게 연결하세요.
例: No, I haven't learned how to sing, but if I had the chance, I would be willing to learn the technical skills.
Who do you want to sing for?
スコア: 60.0提案: 문법 오류와 어색한 표현을 수정하고, 문장을 완성하세요. 'my myself'는 잘못된 표현이며, 마지막 문장은 미완성입니다.
例: I haven't thought about it before, but I would like to sing for myself because singing makes me feel happy and free, which really improves my mood.
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
スコア: 75.0提案: 더 자연스럽고 명확한 연결어를 사용하고, 문장을 간결하게 만드세요. 'many people still can feel' 대신 'many people can still feel'이 더 자연스럽습니다.
例: Well, it depends. Some people don't enjoy singing because they feel awkward, but many can still feel happiness and positive emotions through singing.
文法
× This is because when I singing, I can release my stress.
✓ This is because when I am singing, I can release my stress.
The verb 'singing' needs to be used with the auxiliary verb 'am' to form the present continuous tense. The original sentence lacks the auxiliary verb, making it grammatically incorrect.
× However, if I had the chance to learn technical skills, I will Willing to learn.
✓ However, if I had the chance to learn technical skills, I would be willing to learn.
In conditional sentences referring to hypothetical situations, 'would' is used instead of 'will'. Also, 'willing' needs the verb 'be' to form 'would be willing'.
× I never thought about that before but I want to sing for my myself.
✓ I never thought about that before but I want to sing for myself.
The pronoun 'my' is unnecessary before 'myself'. 'Myself' alone is the correct reflexive pronoun to use here.
× So singing is really changed my mood and.
✓ So singing really changes my mood.
The original sentence has incorrect verb tense and an incomplete structure. 'Is really changed' is incorrect; it should be 'really changes' to match the present tense. Also, the sentence ends abruptly and needs to be completed properly.
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