Singing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答中存在语法错误和重复表达，且部分词汇使用不准确（如“more happier”和“anxious”用法不当）。建议注意语法正确性，避免重复，并使用准确的词汇表达情感。

例: Yes, I definitely like singing because it is a great way for me to relieve stress and feel happier. When I have free time, I often sing with my friends, which is very enjoyable.

提案: 回答结构较好，但可以使用更多连接词使表达更流畅，同时丰富词汇，避免简单重复。

例: No, I have never learned to sing professionally. However, I enjoy singing with my friends for fun because it makes me happy, so I don't feel the need to take formal singing lessons.

提案: 回答中表达不够自然，‘graceful and love’用词不当。建议使用更准确的形容词和名词，并注意句子流畅性。

例: I would like to sing a song for my mother because I have never had the chance to do so. I want to express my love and gratitude to her through the song.

提案: 回答中有语音错误（‘seeing’应为‘singing’），且‘anxious’用法不当。建议注意发音和词汇的准确使用，同时避免重复。

例: Yes, I definitely think singing can make people happier because it helps relieve stress and makes them feel relaxed. For example, when I sing with my friends, I feel very happy and calm.

× When I was have a free time I often singing with my friends.

✓ When I have free time, I often sing with my friends.

句中 'was have' 是错误的动词形式，应使用一般现在时 'have'。'singing' 应改为动词原形 'sing'，因为在此处作谓语动词。建议使用一般现在时表达习惯动作。

× makes me more happier and anxious.

✓ makes me happier and less anxious.

'more happier' 是错误的比较级用法，'happier' 已经是比较级，不需要加 'more'。'anxious' 前应加 'less' 表示减少焦虑。

× I often singing with my friends.

✓ I often sing with my friends.

'singing' 在此处作为谓语动词，应使用动词原形 'sing'。

× When I was have a free time I often singing with my friends.

✓ When I have free time, I often sing with my friends.

句子时态混乱，'was have' 不正确，应使用一般现在时 'have'，因为描述习惯动作。

× I feel very happy and anxious.

✓ I feel very happy and relaxed.

'anxious' 表示焦虑，与上下文想表达的放松相反，应改为 'relaxed'。