Singing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答不够连贯，表达不清晰，句子结构混乱。建议简化句子，明确表达喜欢唱歌的原因，并使用连接词使句子更流畅。

例: Yes, I like singing because it helps me relax and improves my mood. Moreover, singing allows me to express my emotions effectively.

提案: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不够自然。建议使用正确的时态和词汇，清楚说明是否学过唱歌，并简要描述学习方式。

例: Not really, but I have watched some online videos that teach pronunciation and singing tips.

提案: 回答不够完整，表达含糊。建议明确说明想为谁唱歌，并具体说明原因，使用连贯的句子。

例: I want to sing for my friends because they always inspire me. Singing for them makes me feel happy and motivated.

提案: 表达不清晰，语法和词汇使用不当。建议简洁明了地表达观点，使用恰当的词汇和句子结构。

例: Absolutely. Many people enjoy listening to songs because music can touch our hearts and make us feel comfortable.

× I like to sing this about lots of reason like it can make our body relax and let our emotion have good emotion and let me induct in this and this is a.

✓ I like to sing for lots of reasons, like it can make our body relax and let our emotions be good, and let me get involved in this.

此句中'reason'应为复数'reasons'，因为表示多个原因。'emotion'也应为复数'emotions'，表示多种情感。需要注意名词的单复数形式。

× Not really, but before I had seen some scene video in stream and it's teach some pronouncements and some tips about singing.

✓ Not really, but before I saw some scene videos on stream and they taught some pronunciations and some tips about singing.

此句中描述过去发生的动作，应该用一般过去时'saw'而非过去完成时'had seen'。'it's teach'应改为'they taught'，主语和动词时态不一致。

× Not really, but before I had seen some scene video in stream and it's teach some pronouncements and some tips about singing.

✓ Not really, but before I saw some scene videos on stream and they taught some pronunciations and some tips about singing.

'video'应为复数形式'videos'，因为指多个视频。

× Not really, but before I had seen some scene video in stream and it's teach some pronouncements and some tips about singing.

✓ Not really, but before I saw some scene videos on stream and they taught some pronunciations and some tips about singing.

'in stream'应改为'on stream'，表示在某个平台上观看视频，介词用法错误。

× I want to sing for my friend because they always inspire me to do a lot of things and maybe I do these things can let me have good mood and let me find some more, uh.

✓ I want to sing for my friends because they always inspire me to do a lot of things, and maybe doing these things can help me have a good mood and find more, uh.

'friend'应为复数'friends'，因为后文用'他们'指代多个朋友。

× I want to sing for my friend because they always inspire me to do a lot of things and maybe I do these things can let me have good mood and let me find some more, uh.

✓ I want to sing for my friends because they always inspire me to do a lot of things, and maybe doing these things can help me have a good mood and find more, uh.

句中'maybe I do these things can let me...'结构不正确，应改为'maybe doing these things can help me...'，使句子通顺。

× I want to sing for my friend because they always inspire me to do a lot of things and maybe I do these things can let me have good mood and let me find some more, uh.

✓ I want to sing for my friends because they always inspire me to do a lot of things, and maybe doing these things can help me have a good mood and find more, uh.

'have good mood'应为'have a good mood'，缺少冠词'a'。

× Absolutely lots of people like to listen the song that can come so our hearts and let ours emotion more comfortable and I ask my lots of friends like oh, like to listen to.

✓ Absolutely, lots of people like to listen to songs that can touch our hearts and make our emotions more comfortable, and I asked many of my friends who like to listen to them.

'the song'应为复数'songs'，因为指一般的歌曲。'ours emotion'应为'our emotions'，代词和名词复数形式错误。

× Absolutely lots of people like to listen the song that can come so our hearts and let ours emotion more comfortable and I ask my lots of friends like oh, like to listen to.

✓ Absolutely, lots of people like to listen to songs that can touch our hearts and make our emotions more comfortable, and I asked many of my friends who like to listen to them.

'listen the song'应为'listen to songs'，动词listen后需加介词to。

× Absolutely lots of people like to listen the song that can come so our hearts and let ours emotion more comfortable and I ask my lots of friends like oh, like to listen to.

✓ Absolutely, lots of people like to listen to songs that can touch our hearts and make our emotions more comfortable, and I asked many of my friends who like to listen to them.

'I ask'描述过去询问，应使用过去时态'asked'。