Singing— Part 1 採点レポート
会話
Part 1
試験官
Do you like singing? Why?
受験者
Yes, I really enjoy singing because it gives me great pleasure and I became more relaxed when I sing. Also, I really love singing with my friends when we hang out and we usually go to karaoke bars together.
試験官
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
受験者
No, I haven't, uh, participated in, uh, some lessons of singing, but actually I tried to learn it by myself at home, but to be honest, it didn't work well. So I think that I would like to.
試験官
Who do you want to sing for?
受験者
I'm not really sure, but I would like to sing for myself because singing gives me great pleasure and it helps me to become more calm and confident.
試験官
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
受験者
In fact, I would like to think so, because umm, nowadays singing is like mental therapy for a lot of people. So for me. That's why I'm thinking that, yes.
評価
総合
Part 1
Do you like singing? Why?
スコア: 75.0提案: Ответ должен быть более естественным и избегать повторений. Например, вместо "I became more relaxed when I sing" лучше сказать "I feel more relaxed when I sing". Также стоит использовать связующие слова для плавности речи.
例: Yes, I really enjoy singing because it brings me great pleasure and helps me feel more relaxed. Moreover, I love singing with my friends when we hang out, and we often go to karaoke bars together.
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
スコア: 65.0提案: Ответ содержит много пауз и нечетких выражений. Следует избегать слов-паразитов и строить предложения более плавно и логично.
例: No, I haven't taken any formal singing lessons, but I have tried to learn by myself at home. However, it was not very effective, so I would like to take professional lessons in the future.
Who do you want to sing for?
スコア: 70.0提案: Ответ можно сделать более структурированным и связным, используя связующие слова и избегая повторений.
例: I'm not exactly sure, but I would like to sing for myself because it brings me great pleasure. Additionally, singing helps me feel calmer and more confident.
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
スコア: 60.0提案: Ответ содержит много пауз и нечетких выражений. Следует использовать более уверенные формулировки и связные предложения.
例: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people because nowadays it serves as a form of mental therapy for many. For me personally, singing always lifts my mood and reduces stress.
文法
× I really enjoy singing because it gives me great pleasure and I became more relaxed when I sing.
✓ I really enjoy singing because it gives me great pleasure and I become more relaxed when I sing.
The verb 'became' is in the past tense, but the sentence describes a general truth or habitual action, so the present tense 'become' should be used instead.
× No, I haven't, uh, participated in, uh, some lessons of singing, but actually I tried to learn it by myself at home, but to be honest, it didn't work well.
✓ No, I haven't participated in any singing lessons, but actually I have tried to learn it by myself at home, but to be honest, it hasn't worked well.
The present perfect tense 'haven't participated' is correct for an action not done up to now. 'Tried' should be in present perfect 'have tried' to indicate an experience up to now. 'Didn't work' should be 'hasn't worked' to maintain present relevance.
× No, I haven't, uh, participated in, uh, some lessons of singing, but actually I tried to learn it by myself at home, but to be honest, it didn't work well.
✓ No, I haven't participated in any singing lessons, but actually I have tried to learn it by myself at home, but to be honest, it hasn't worked well.
The phrase 'lessons of singing' is unnatural; the correct preposition is 'singing lessons'. Also, 'some' is less appropriate than 'any' in negative sentences.
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