Singing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is generally clear but could be more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy and unclear phrases like "blurriness of doing those activities." Also, try to limit your response to about 3-4 sentences and use linking words to improve coherence.

例: Yes, I enjoy singing while doing activities like studying or washing dishes because it helps me stay focused and makes the tasks more enjoyable.

提案: Your answer addresses the question but could be improved by using more natural phrasing and clearer sentence structure. Avoid repetition and use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

例: No, I have never formally learned how to sing, but I would love to because it requires using the right vocals at the right time. Since singing is challenging, it takes hours of practice and dedication to master.

提案: Your answer is relevant but could be more natural and detailed. Instead of "sing rightfully," use clearer expressions. Also, add linking words to connect your ideas and provide more specific reasons.

例: I'm not very interested in singing publicly, but if I had to, I would sing in front of my family because their support helps me feel less nervous and more confident.

提案: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains awkward phrasing like "singing song" and "make the persons feel bright." Try to use more natural expressions and provide specific examples. Also, use linking words to improve coherence.

例: I believe singing can bring happiness depending on the situation. For example, when people feel stressed or sad, singing uplifting songs can improve their mood and make them feel better.

× No, I never learned how to sing, but I would love to do it to use the right vocals at the right time.

✓ No, I have never learned how to sing, but I would love to do it to use the right vocals at the right time.

The sentence uses 'never learned' which is simple past tense, but the context implies an experience up to now, so present perfect 'have never learned' is more appropriate to express an action that has not happened at any time before now.

× It's pretty difficult and not an average person can do it instantaneously.

✓ It's pretty difficult and not an average person can do it instantaneously.

This sentence is grammatically correct; no singular/plural issue detected here.

× It takes hours of practice and dedication to to learn the art of singing.

✓ It takes hours of practice and dedication to learn the art of singing.

There is a repeated word 'to' which is a typographical error, not a grammar problem type listed. Removing the extra 'to' corrects the sentence.

× It helps me be less nervous and sing rightfully.

✓ It helps me be less nervous and sing correctly.

The adverb 'rightfully' is incorrectly used here; 'correctly' is the appropriate adverb to describe singing in the right manner.

× Let's say if the situation is very daunting, then singing song would make the persons feel bright and elevate their mood.

✓ Let's say if the situation is very daunting, then singing a song would make the person feel bright and elevate their mood.

The phrase 'singing song' is missing an article 'a' before 'song' to indicate singular countable noun. Also, 'persons' is plural but context suggests singular 'person' to match 'a song'.