Singing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，建议使用更准确的词汇和句式表达自己的感受，同时避免重复和冗余。

例: Yes, I really enjoy singing because it helps me relax and lifts my mood. It always makes me feel happy and cheerful.

提案: 回答语法错误较多，表达不够清晰，建议使用正确的时态和句式，并且组织语言更连贯。

例: I haven't had formal singing lessons, so I'm not a very good singer. However, I enjoy singing by myself whenever I have free time.

提案: 回答表达不清晰，句子结构混乱，建议简洁明了地表达想法，并避免无意义的短语。

例: I would like to sing for my mom because she means a lot to me. Singing for her is a way to show my love and appreciation.

提案: 回答中有严重语法和词汇错误，表达不连贯，建议使用简单明了的句子表达观点，并使用恰当的词汇。

例: Absolutely, I believe singing can bring happiness to people. It helps express emotions and can make people feel joyful and relaxed.

× I just like to singing.

✓ I just like to sing.

动词like后面接动词不定式to do或动名词doing，但在这里应使用不定式to sing，而不是to singing。

× Singing can bring and convince good feelings and most it can make me happy and glad.

✓ Singing can bring and convey good feelings, and mostly it can make me happy and glad.

名词feelings是复数，前面应使用复数形式的形容词或动词。动词convince用错，应为convey（传达）。另外，句子结构不清晰，需调整。

× I barely learned that.

✓ I have barely learned that.

这里表达过去到现在的经历，应该用现在完成时have learned，而不是一般过去时learned。

× Singing all the time, singing myself, no listener.

✓ I sing all the time, singing by myself, with no listener.

句子缺少主语和谓语动词，且表达不完整。应补充主语I和谓语动词sing，且用动名词短语singing by myself修饰。

× my mom is the one who I most love.

✓ my mom is the one whom I love the most.

关系代词who在宾语位置时应使用whom，且love的副词most应放在句尾。

× Be a group.

✓ I will be part of a group.

原句缺少主语和谓语，结构不完整，需补充完整句子。

× Singing is definitely a good way to convince. Glad mousse and feelings and a good way.

✓ Singing is definitely a good way to convey glad moods and feelings, and a good way to be happy.

单词convince用错，应为convey（传达）。单词mousse拼写错误，应为mood。句子结构混乱，需调整。