Singing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is clear and relevant, but it could be more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy by combining similar ideas and use linking words to improve flow. Also, try to use more varied vocabulary to express your feelings about singing.

例: Yes, I like singing because it's a fun way to relax and enjoy time with friends. Although I sang more often as a child, now I mostly join karaoke sessions during special occasions, which I find very entertaining.

提案: Your answer is informative but contains some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Use correct verb forms and clearer linking words to improve coherence. Also, try to be more concise and avoid unnecessary details.

例: No, I have never taken formal singing lessons. However, as a child, I watched a TV program that taught singing techniques, which helped me understand the basics of music, even though I never practiced singing seriously.

提案: Your answer is clear and relevant, but you can improve it by using more varied vocabulary and linking words to connect your ideas smoothly. Also, try to avoid minor grammatical mistakes and be more concise.

例: I prefer singing alone because I'm quite shy and introverted. Singing quietly in my room helps me relax and feel comfortable without worrying about others watching me.

提案: Your answer has several grammatical errors and lacks clarity. Try to use correct subject-verb agreement and clearer sentence structures. Also, provide more specific reasons and examples to support your opinion, and use linking words to organize your ideas.

例: I believe singing can bring happiness to people who enjoy it and feel confident in their voice. However, for those who dislike singing or struggle with pitch and rhythm, it might not be as enjoyable or uplifting.

× I found it quite interesting because it's gave me a basic understanding of music even though I never practiced it myself.

✓ I found it quite interesting because it gave me a basic understanding of music even though I never practiced it myself.

The phrase 'it's gave' is incorrect because 'gave' is the past tense of 'give' and should not be combined with 'it's' (it is). The correct form is simply 'it gave'. This is a past tense issue where an auxiliary verb is incorrectly used with a past tense verb.

× Honestly, I'm quite introverted and shy so I don't like singing in front of the people.

✓ Honestly, I'm quite introverted and shy so I don't like singing in front of people.

The phrase 'in front of the people' is incorrect because 'the people' implies specific people previously mentioned, which is not the case here. The correct phrase is 'in front of people' to indicate people in general. This is an incorrect use of pronouns/determiners.

× I usually only sing when I'm alone because it's helped me relax and feel comfortable in my own space.

✓ I usually only sing when I'm alone because it helps me relax and feel comfortable in my own space.

The phrase 'it's helped' uses present perfect tense, which is inconsistent with the habitual action described by 'usually'. The correct tense is simple present 'it helps' to indicate a regular effect. This is a present tense issue.

× It depends if someone likes singing or if someone have a good voices.

✓ It depends if someone likes singing or if someone has a good voice.

The phrase 'someone have a good voices' is incorrect because 'someone' is singular and requires the singular verb 'has' and singular noun 'voice'. 'Voices' is plural and does not agree with 'someone'. This is a singular and plural issue.

× But if someone don't like to sing or doesn't have good voices or don't understand notes or release, I don't think so.

✓ But if someone doesn't like to sing or doesn't have a good voice or doesn't understand notes or rhythm, I don't think so.

The phrase 'someone don't like' is incorrect because 'someone' is singular and requires 'doesn't like'. Also, 'good voices' should be singular 'a good voice' to agree with 'someone'. 'Release' is unclear in this context and likely a mistake; 'rhythm' fits better. This is a singular and plural issue and incorrect word choice.