Singing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: आपके उत्तर में भावनाएँ स्पष्ट हैं, लेकिन आप कुछ वाक्यांशों को और अधिक प्राकृतिक और संक्षिप्त बना सकते हैं। उदाहरण के लिए, "I'm not very keen on singing myself" की जगह "I don't really enjoy singing myself" अधिक सरल और प्रभावी होगा। साथ ही, "especially when I am at concerts or watching music videos" को "especially at concerts or while watching music videos" से बेहतर जोड़ा जा सकता है।

例: I don't really enjoy singing myself because I'm not confident about my voice. However, I love listening to others sing, especially at concerts or while watching music videos. Their singing is soothing and uplifting, which helps me relax after a busy day.

提案: आपके उत्तर में दोहराव है और कुछ वाक्य संरचना में सुधार की आवश्यकता है। "I've never checked on singing classes" की जगह "I've never taken singing classes" अधिक स्वाभाविक होगा। साथ ही, "classical soft songs" की जगह "soft classical music" कहना बेहतर होगा।

例: I've never taken singing classes because I'm not very interested in singing. However, I enjoy listening to music, which I find very therapeutic and relaxing. For example, I often listen to soft classical music to help me unwind after a hectic day.

提案: आपका उत्तर थोड़ा अधूरा और अस्पष्ट है, जैसे "if I did I would be." को पूरा करना चाहिए। साथ ही, "Singing is not my cup of tea" एक अच्छा वाक्यांश है, लेकिन आप इसे और स्पष्ट कर सकते हैं।

例: Singing is not my cup of tea, so I don't usually sing for anyone. But if I did, I would sing for my close friends or family just for fun.

提案: आपके उत्तर में व्याकरण और वाक्य संरचना की गलतियाँ हैं, जैसे "helps individual relax" की जगह "helps individuals relax" होना चाहिए। साथ ही, अंतिम वाक्य अधूरा है। आप अपने विचारों को स्पष्ट और पूर्ण वाक्यों में व्यक्त करें।

例: I believe singing can bring a lot of happiness to people. For example, it is a very therapeutic activity because it helps individuals relax and temporarily forget their worries. Moreover, it allows them to express their emotions and feelings through a song, which makes them feel happier and more content.

× singing is very therapeutic activity because it helps individual relax and temporarily forget about their worries

✓ singing is a very therapeutic activity because it helps individuals relax and temporarily forget about their worries

The sentence has singular and plural issues. 'Activity' is a countable noun and requires an article 'a'. 'Individual' should be plural 'individuals' to agree with the plural subject 'them' later in the sentence. Correcting these improves grammatical accuracy and clarity.

× which makes them feel more enjoyable and

✓ which makes them feel more joyful

The adjective 'enjoyable' is incorrectly used to describe feelings. The correct adjective to describe feelings is 'joyful'. Also, the sentence was incomplete and needed to be finished properly for clarity.